|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Like dirty water after the snow melts
A fine simile that serves to emphasize the theme of this poem; and I can relate, Sue. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|there's a difference in feeling bad and depression Sue, anyway great down to earth poeming|
|Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed
|Life has ups and downs. As long as you are able to pull yourself out, you are fine. Stay well, and keep posting.
You inspire in everyone of your poems.
Thank you Sue.
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|and that is for sure
i have been trying to find its pattern in me
i try and coat it with something sweet to off set the sour
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I hear you...and yes positive thinking could solve the problem for a little while!!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|ahhh but if you are patient you can ride the wave ride till it once more rushes to the top...life is likt that.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|a bit dismal--you must not let depression be inevitable--chase it away--stay focused on something else-|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Have you tried Effexor?|