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My Shadow
by Micki Peluso

Saturday, October 10, 2009
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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This poem is a prompt contest poem--the prompt being, "My Shadow".

The shadow followed me all day
Glimpsed in farthest corners of my eyes
Each time I turned, it sped away
Wherever Shadows run to hide

It took not shape, nor any form,
At least from what I briefly spied
It seemed a darkly presence at my back
I hurried home, and ran inside
Would its blackness fade with sunlight's lack?

No, it hovers just beyond my view
In darkness shows its wicked might
Taught me terrors I never knew
I reached quickly for some light

Each click, each lamp,
brought no flare, no brightness
To turn away the dark
Which made the Shadow more aware
That I could feel its evil mark

Do I deserve this dreaded fate?
My sins crossed o'er my mind and soul
Must I now pay the devil's toll?
Or be redeemed too late?
Only my Shadow knows

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Reviewed by Connie Faust 11/9/2009
Too bad, so sad, that your shadow did not glimpse the Light. As long as we live, with mind intact, it is not too late to be redeemed.
You've given a very interesting and unique look at a different kind of Shadow.
Connie
Reviewed by richard cederberg 10/27/2009
An engaging metaphor
with lingering imagery.
The shadow could be many things
in a persons life. enjoyed.
Blessings ...
r
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 10/23/2009
where have all the friendly shadows gone...?
cg
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/16/2009
An interesting and thought-inciting write, Micki. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 10/12/2009
Excellent!!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 10/11/2009
Apropos for the haunting season, Micki, very well penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/11/2009
Great writing, Micki; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 10/11/2009
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Mary Metcalf 10/10/2009
that is cute, i like it, just in time for halloween, good work
mary etta



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