|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Wonderful poem.....Welcome to AD.........Ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Such a moving write.
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|My eyes rose to silver and white and fragrant reds.
The air was still but the sounds were loud.
I kept focus as my strides were steady.
With shaking hands and weak knees I stood.
My eyes blurred as I looked down.
Darkness surrounded me as whites and satins lay before me.
I inhaled strong scents and opened my eyes to paleness.
Excellent words here
|Reviewed by Gary Gebert
|Very nice! It was as if I could really be the person described.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
o, i felt this one deep in my soul--heartmoving, wonderfully written
i particularly love the line, "inhaled strong scents and opened my eyes to paleness."
BTW, welcome to AD, we're family here! :) stop by anytime!
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