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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
1/15/2011 |
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| Oh so true. Alcohol and drugs do not heal the pain and just make things worse. Yes. Some problems are bigger than us and we need help to get through them. Sometimes its hard to reach out for that help. Sometimes our hands remain remain painfully empty when we do. Sometimes help needs to come from beyond humanity. May Light shine into the person this was written about. |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
5/12/2008 |
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Perfectly expressed and all too relevant for all too many Americans
these days. T h a n k . y o u !! 'Pea' <3
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
5/9/2008 |
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So true!!! Liquor and drugs can only numb the pain for a while, but they won't go away.
A very realistic write!!!
Sandie Angel :( |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
5/9/2008 |
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Short and to the point...I like the honesty here.
Gina |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
5/9/2008 |
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| Excellent writing sweet lady...have a great and safe day...Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
5/8/2008 |
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The answer is not inside the bottom of the bottle
I been there & done that...This is a very truthful & emotive write Jazz, Many emotions are there too.
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Cody SEA |
5/8/2008 |
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realistic and fabulous. I like your style; very well written. thank you for sharing.
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
5/7/2008 |
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| So much power in so few lines! Excellent! |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
5/7/2008 |
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| Very true, some choose to run away from pain by adding more pain. they refuse to face the (Wo)Man in the mirror! Very wise words here Jazz... |
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| Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier |
5/7/2008 |
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| Great write Jazz. You hit the nail on the head "problems bigger than us" sometimes can't be solved by us alone. Luckily we live in a part of the world that does offer help. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/7/2008 |
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The way some choose to deal with the problems at hand, very sad, yet sometimes true....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
5/7/2008 |
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This sounds familiar to a lot of people but I know that Liquor can not kill or wash away misery, if anything it makes matters worst. What kills misery is having a friend who is willing to listen and help you dump the added baggage making you realize, right next door to misery lives happiness and most of us are blind to it. Thank you for sharing your words Lavendar.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Shedding Light |
5/7/2008 |
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This is an example of life a life that is so ongoing on planet earth ... and very well expressed.
Harold M. Nash |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
5/7/2008 |
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| most do do this but i quit drinking 20 years back. i take life on the chin, but I always tell my wife if I was a drinking man, i'd be drunk as all outdoors, great down to earth verse |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
5/7/2008 |
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| Boy did you get this problem right. Short and sweet and straight to the point. Misery loves company and likes to be accompanied by any numbing agent around. I've worked through some of my misery so I feel better but still this is sometimes a problem. I'd rather take a pill than feel the pain. When the pain in almost constant what is one to do? Excellent write. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
5/7/2008 |
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This sounds like a personal experience. Simple,yet so powerful.
Mary, the desertrat |
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