Eyes of an Angel
by Frank M Williams
Saturday, July 06, 2002
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Ever since I first saw you, I knew you were fine,
Fine enough to know that I had to make you mine,
Cause when I looked into your eyes I knew it was worth a try,
To see if Iím good enough to be your guy.
Though i hardly know you, I know were meant to be,
Even though we havenít really talked, I can tell your feeling me,
The way you smile when you see me says I canít be wrong,
But if I am and you donít love me, I donít know how Iíll get along,
I see the eyes of angel when I look your way,
And our love could last forever if it starts today,
Cause your eyes donít lie and what I feel is true ,
And if you give me your heart right now, I wonít stop loving you.
I wrote this poem about a girl named Larra. I thought we could've had a relationship but she turned out to be a hoe so I left her alone.
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|Reviewed by jude forese
|love can be deceiving...|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Well, again, you can call me stupid. What does "hoe" means?
Nice write regardless!!!!!
May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|Hoe's need love too!!! Bitter write but em...it was real enjoyable....looks can be deceiving, when will you men learn???|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|a bittersweet experience...there will be better times ahead...;-)|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Beautiful poem, Frank! Ouch...sorry the "lady" turned out to be a ho...she didn't deserve you. Hope you find--or have found--someone better! (((HUGS))) and Love, Karla. :)|