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Testify
by Faisa Ali
Sunday, March 09, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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See I remained for the long
Spent many nights trying
Saving something that was gone
The pain never felt so strong
I could never fathom
Wanting you could be wrong
My tongue severed from my mouth
My words misconstrue d
Perplexed utters headed south
Doomed from the start
Your liabilities came first
Weak grew my heart
All I wanted was to be loved
Its only fair, I got my heart robbed.
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| Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi |
1/26/2009 |
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| You're excellent. Your power is in every line. |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
3/9/2008 |
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First off, let me say a big Welcome, so happy to have you here. I have read all of your poems so far and you really have a gifted voice. You bring the written word alive. All my best to you.
Janet Caldwell xoxoxo |
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