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All Because of Prickly Words
by Patricia M Eichler
Friday, May 23, 2008
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In the newspaper today, I read of a man who gets life, with no parole. He shot five neighbors, killed three and wounded two. He had become a fireman to help others. Firefighters often go without sleep to do this. He could have asked his neighbors to stop shooting off fireworks. When midnight came, and they continued to shoot them off, he went out wielding a handgun.


 

Prickly words cut like swords.

Yes, it is way past time to go to bed.
Sweat dampens the hair on his head.
Yet, still he has an urge to compose
Prickly words, like thorns on a rose.

His feelings of anger will not go away,
Nor will sleep come before a new day.
“My anger grows!” he wants to growl,
“My temper emanates from me so foul.”

However, a friend walks beside him
Who guides him to a trail not so dim?
To a path where he will not stumble,
One to stay on and to remain humble.

He says, ‘my pride won’t influence me.’
When anger comes, from it I shall flee
Fury would override another’s welfare
For wrath gives no one empathy or care.

If I should let it enter within and burrow
All forever will have regret and sorrow
Observe a man who shot noisy neighbors
All for lack sleep and a day of hard labors.

Now all suffer the consequences of it
He shot and killed three and some hit.
The man spends all his days in prison.
All hurt, for no one listened to reason.

 All Because of Prickly Words.

 

 


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Reviewed by OnepoetGem * 5/24/2008
sad event Pat but you covered it very well, in this world of high prices and stupidy some people are walking time bombs, but their is no excuse for crossing the line, hugs
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 5/23/2008
An anger manifested to the point of insanity and so many pay the price for the one, a scene played many times over these days....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by George Carroll 5/23/2008
Anger over shadows reason and turns to madness.
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 5/23/2008
Recently, we had a similar incident in my normally peaceful, rural community. I wrote about it in "The Veil." Thankfully, no one was killed here, but one was severely injured by gunshot. Your poem is very nicely written - tight lines and nice rhyming and flow. I enjoyed your composition and connect easily to the message you convey.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/23/2008
Sadness - powerfully penned, Patricia.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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