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|Reviewed by Robert JudeAce
|nice progression of idea...|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|I agree with Josie...and like a few of your writings as of late they have to simmer....you are one of the deepest writers I have come across.....your like reading "in" reverse-psychology...your eyes are too good to not care...|
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
|very powerful. i read this yesterday, and let it sink in, came back today and have to tell you that there are some excellent lines here, i love "i have a man size sorrow". the way you take a concrete image "ocean" and use it as a metaphor, for how you view your life/day. This is poetry well done. "I am not angst"
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Sounds more like a nightmare to me! Nice dark piece, William!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
|Reviewed by Scada (Reader)
|I agree with the predator. You care, I just think that sometimes you care TOO much, but that's what makes you so good.
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Dramatic William! Very vivid.|
|Reviewed by the predator
|if you don't give a fuck then you have no reason to write such expressive words...look a little deeper Mr Perez, you may find that you care more than you think.|