its light hearted i swear, unicorns and rainbows inside just a click away (poem) by William Perez on AuthorsDen

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1.	Birthday in Heaven


2.	A button pushed...


3.	A Journey Of Self Discovery


4.	Requiem


5.	Where The Wind Came Sweeping Down The Plai


6.	A certain song...


7.	A Day Of Flowers


8.	Delicious Target


9.	A Thousand Ugly Miles


10.	A Letter From An Inmate


11.	Mogadishu Times


12.	An Empty Chair


13.	a famous bard


14.	A Lifetime Ago


15.	A Lesson In Dying

its light hearted i swear, unicorns and rainbows inside just a click away by William Perez Friday, July 12, 2002 Share Print Save Become a Fan ``````````````````````````` ```````````````````` ``````````````````````````` `````````````````` Deadly accurate ``````feelings of worthlessness straight up despair let my guard down, made the mistake of turning my back to the ocean, Poseidon is no fool and quickly capitalized on my error. Before I had the chance to dive thru, it caught me hard in the throat pinned my shoulders to the sand and rolled me into the reef. No escaping this bastard No chance It walloped my ass all the way in Bloodied me Broke me Dripping dry Ass in hot sand Melting deeper into tears I daydream of blown out brains And a body without testicles Another 1 turned to shit Started with promise But turned to shit I am not angst That trash long passed me by I have grown something more powerful More desperate I have a man size sorrow Is it curtains for the dynamic duo Tune in next week Blah blah blah Im not sure I give a fuck either way

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Reviewed by Robert JudeAce	7/13/2002

nice progression of idea...




Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson	7/13/2002

I agree with Josie...and like a few of your writings as of late they have to simmer....you are one of the deepest writers I have come across.....your like reading "in" reverse-psychology...your eyes are too good to not care...




Reviewed by Josephine Bohen	7/13/2002

very powerful. i read this yesterday, and let it sink in, came back today and have to tell you that there are some excellent lines here, i love "i have a man size sorrow". the way you take a concrete image "ocean" and use it as a metaphor, for how you view your life/day. This is poetry well done. "I am not angst" a keeper josie




Reviewed by Sandie Angel	7/13/2002

Sounds more like a nightmare to me! Nice dark piece, William! Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $_$




Reviewed by Scada (Reader)	7/12/2002

I agree with the predator. You care, I just think that sometimes you care TOO much, but that's what makes you so good. Scada




Reviewed by Linda Hill	7/12/2002

Dramatic William! Very vivid.




Reviewed by the predator	7/12/2002

if you don't give a fuck then you have no reason to write such expressive words...look a little deeper Mr Perez, you may find that you care more than you think.