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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
7/15/2002 |
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Now this one I really loved. The reality of life on the streets through its continuous cycles while once shared love vanishes in those vignettes you paint with words.
Excellent work. |
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| Reviewed by Scada (Reader) |
7/15/2002 |
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Unutterably sad. This feels real, and it makes me ache.
Scada |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
7/15/2002 |
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| Excellent write. Love the ending. |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
7/15/2002 |
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sounds real......felt it through my bones
great write here!!! |
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| Reviewed by Josephine Bohen |
7/15/2002 |
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so poignant i want to cry
josie |
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