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|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Brilliant execution on this piece. I think I have undergone the same condition...when my mind is constantly under seige by the words...and the need to write them down tethers me sometimes even when I am trying to sleep. Sometimes I wish for that peace of having a blank mind without a single thought. Excellent work!!!
|Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
|I chuckled at this one. I could picture a repetativeness to your struggle. As if you were poetry's "Rainman", secure in your routine of rhyme.
I haven't seen you here before, I'm glad I did today.
Gotta go....."Wapner at eleven..."
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|You pray in vain for the impossible. Your mind is to full of poems and songs and the rhymes that go into them. Once trapped by your muse there is no escape. So don't find it. Let's celebrate our song and hope it is picked up soon. Where have you been?
Remember. "It's Last Call For Love." Bill Murray
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|I'm agreeing with you too. Great write!
Sandie Angel :o)