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Ode to a General
by Terry P. Rizzuti
Wednesday, April 16, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.

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This is an unpublished poem, a eulogy to a fallen hero: my dad.


 

ODE TO A GENERAL
Copyright 2008 -- 2009 , by Terry P. Rizzuti
 
When I was a young Marine in Vietnam
            And times would get tough --
Incoming mortars, rounds flying,
            People screaming, crying and dying --
I'd think of you, Dad,
            And I'd picture you wearing your uniform,
With medals all over your chest,
            And you'd be charging up some hill,
With a gung-ho look on your face.
            And it would be then, that without fail,
A transformation would take place.
 
Give me strength in my roots, I’d yell.
GIVE ME STRENGTH IN MY ROOTS!
 
I am Terry, son of Terigo, son of Marco and Rosa.
I am Terry, son of Teresa, daughter of Thomaso and Angela.
 
I am not a particularly religious man,
            And neither were you, Dad.
But one thing we both agreed on:
            Nothing is destroyed, only transformed.
So I'm not sure where you are now,
            Where this journey has taken you.
But one thing is clear:
            I will join you someday; I will join you.
And before I do,
            There is something I want you to know:
 
My heroes have always been soldiers,
And I salute you, my General; I salute you.
 
Two score and seven or more years ago
My father brought forth upon the
European continent his tremendous powers
Of observation as a forward observer
In the United States Army.
 
I call upon his spirit now;
I call upon his spirit
To resurrect those powers and use them
To guide me on the rest of my journey.
 
I love you, Dad, and I miss you.
Arivederci, my General!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Reviewed by John Domino 10/21/2008
A GREAT tribute to a wonderful man I am sure!

Arivederci, General!

John Michael
Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce 9/25/2008
It's great to see someone so close in spirit to his dad. What a wonderful father-son relationship this is. We always look up to our dads as heroes, and yours is a true one!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS 7/27/2008
This is BEAUTIFUL Terry, it brought many tears to my eyes, but that is fine, I learned much through your O P E N and giving heart and soul, and this write! and even your own honored and grateful all knowing strong resourceful dad!
I bet you did resurrect his spirit to be with your own!
This is so gallant of you to do!
WRITE ON!
This poem is a shining gem and I plan to savor this treasure!
Warmest Blessings, LOVE, and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo

STay Positive1
My dad's last name is Thomas too, English, I'm English and French, Desroisers... You sounded a lot English, that is why I mentioned that...
Reviewed by John Leko 7/27/2008
...heartfelt beauty in your words...becomes the remembrance of your father...so wonderful this tribute...poetic asking of his timeless guidance.
very well written Terry...
John
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 7/27/2008
No one, but only those that have been soldiers and looked at death with contempt can express such fine words to a father asking for strength not for help.
A great tribute.

Georg
Reviewed by Joanna Leone 6/4/2008
This poem is very touching. This is a well-written poem. I have a lot of respect for the men and women who have served in the wars, wether it be Vietnam, World War 1 and World War II, Korean War, Iraq, etc. My heart skipped a beat when I read your poem. You deserve to be saluted with your work! Excellent poem
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 5/24/2008

Blessed are those that honor their fathers for they will never lose their identities.

Patriotic, filial, bountiful, beautiful and honorable composition in poetic rhythm and emotion; ~ poetized with wise words, and painted with the colors of the rainbow of dignity. "Ode to a General" glows.

In respect,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Gerald Tate 4/27/2008
Different and heartfelt.

Deeply thought. Well penned. From the heart.

Best-Gerald J Tate
Reviewed by R. Armstrong 4/18/2008
Well written T.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 4/16/2008
Extremely heartfelt and oh so painstakingly penned. A fine tribute to your father whom I am sure is watching over you...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 4/16/2008
I enjoy the reality of your writing--love these linesBut one thing we both agreed on: Nothing is destroyed, only transformed. Also a wonderful tribute to your father


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