|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Hi again~ Blesssings for the all that was to be done!
Crumpled by the dumpster, glad you picked it up!
YOur routines are done is fun pen form, I love it...
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|Enjoyed tremendously this absorbing swirl of consciousness making its way through mundane practicalities and emotional tension. As with much of the best your work--to me--it illustrates the tight rope of anxiety (or is it sensitivity?) stretched between the nonchalance and quiet desperation that composes so many of our lives. And that somehow ends up tossed out of our souls CRUMPLED BY DUMPSTER.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
A very intriguing write, and very thought-provoking! Something like a slice of life and is honest and real. Good to read something like this.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Amgel :o)
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|This poem had an emotional impact on me. I'm not sure why. Your work is so creative and innovative, Pea. Thank you. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Love this, Pea! One could live this simple list for life...or at least I could...what more do you need...maybe a few rhinestones and Rit! I printed this out and magneted it to my fridge with a ceramic pea in the pod I have!--->it's a keeper.
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|Adorable, so real and yeat so sweet (most by the cookie aisle :))
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|I love freckles and chocolate kiss eyes.
My oh my what a day I'd say.
|Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
|sounds like my life actually like high heels staccato tapping, shortened thoughts with only time to hear bits and pieces of life as it rushes by in a blur...........GREAT WORDS!|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Everyones gone cookie Kookie|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|It is amazing the messages and stories of our day to day lifes that are captured in our many varied list and routines as this poem so brightly shows captured.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Seems to me like the cookie bug been a contagious thingy all over the Den...lol!!
Well Done Pea!!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Never Forget the Cookies!!!|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Complex. Unique. Brilliant slices of life, the moment here, then gone, thrown away like so much trash...well done, my beloved Pea!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
|What a bundle of emotions all wrapped up in a grocery bag full of life and love's complexities. Just incredibly flashing and imaginative and real my friend.
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
Only you, brilliant you, could have written this wonderfully original and imaginative piece..
And do I detect Pea... that you have been afflicted with that deadly cookie craving, instigated by Ogre Ed and Lady A Pax...:)