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Who could stay sane without taking the odd vacation? Too often and too long
present dangers, but we are only human. . .right?
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Dreamtown If you have ever been to Denial (can't imagine you haven't) you know it doesn't rain. Oh, a few drops mist. Feel like rose petals warmed to match your skin. No fake rose odor, but the real thing. Few clouds are whipped potatoes with gobs of butter and half-and-half. Cream matches the texture of your skin the minute you hit the main street. Called Nirvana. Crosses Dream. No biblical scholar, but I know that somewhere it says that wine is an asp that turns and bites. To my sorrow, even Denial knows it is so. The irony is that Denial draws me more. Time there is slow when you want slow, lightning when lightning you need. Mirrors are glazed with amber- rose that flatters every face. Frown, and it reflects a smile. Hidden speakers give you Voice. Every word you say is brilliant. Every word you write surpasses. Everyone loves you, except those you love to think hate. Pain disappears as you skip, lithe as a kindergartner, along Candy Lane. (Parallel to Slender, a cul- de-sac have to see to believe.) Try to take my Denial away. Just update your will and say 'bye. Me, I'm on my way to Perfect Sex at that place on Balmy. Line up after (but not long) to dance to an oldies. Lie beneath a sky rife with stars to listen to the sea shush with rhyme. Tell the truth. 'Be in the next towel-draped chaise in a flash. Can't blame!
(c) Phyllis Jean Green, Autumn, 2007
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
11/5/2007 |
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I love this Pea, I wanta go to Denial
and walk down Nirvana ;) Dreamtown, ah
now there I've hung out... |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
11/4/2007 |
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(((Pea)))
Graphic and poem combine to make a powerful statement. Been there, myself, we all have. Love it, YOU most of all.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
11/4/2007 |
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| Hey, I was saving a place right by me for you. I love denial and you summed it up fantastically like always. Excellent. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/4/2007 |
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Yes I think I dropped by that little berg a time or two, might have even spent a night or two in Denial's prison of the mind. Great write as always sweetie...
Fee |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/4/2007 |
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| dreamtown is indeed a very subjective place ... all depends on what you believe ... |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
11/4/2007 |
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| Adam and Eve were tempted by the snake to eat from the forbidden tree which they were told would make the like God. Yes many things we should deny ourselves in order to build a strong character. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
11/4/2007 |
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| interesting write on the dangerous existence in denial-enjoyed it |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
11/4/2007 |
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I enjoyed
That is a neat graphic..
Stay safe |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/4/2007 |
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| Dreamtown can truly be many different things, to many different people. And I love that graphic! |
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