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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
2/20/2009 |
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Whoa, YOU are going through SOMETHING and I wish you the strength to get through it! Phyll - Pea
Good and Bad of what we see here,
I Hope brings this message clear!
You found a clever way of expressing yourself in (others lives are the same) my dear!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
2/19/2009 |
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I myself are a fanatic of king-size ones, big as a Super-Bowl pitch for the play and games with elbow space and hopefully a vibrant experienced cheerleader to lead....but I am digressing, you were saying?
Georg
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
2/6/2009 |
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| Deep and profound. Unique approach to a problem many can relate to. Imagery wonderful. I love your style of fragments that string together to form such beautiful poetry. Excellent. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
2/5/2009 |
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| the good....you've picked a subject most readers can relate to...and the bad...most readers can relate too. ;) |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
2/5/2009 |
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| your approach in relating this lament many have experienced, was novel -- and quite interesting -- I enjoyed it Phylis - thanks for sharing -- much peace and love-- JMW |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
2/4/2009 |
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| I can see why you wrote the disclaimer, but you're right, this poem is about feelings and situations most of us can relate to. Enjoyed the read, Pea. Good to look at your words again. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
2/2/2009 |
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excellent write Phyllis
most enjoyable reading
Love & peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
2/1/2009 |
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| wonderfully written--i truly enjoyed the realism and truth in the words, made up or not! |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
2/1/2009 |
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I love the different twist you applied to the telling of this sad and all to often story of failed relationships...do you think a warranty on love would help?
peace and love, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
2/1/2009 |
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| I really enjoyed this work. Speaks clearly to our penchant for letting little and big stuff get in the way of what is really important; our relationships. Blessings, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
1/31/2009 |
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Nice work on this view into that tiresome repetition of mending the unmendable...
enjoyed...
Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
1/31/2009 |
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| Start with a pet, and you won't need any of the other ha, A great spool of yarn I enjoyed, the needling of it, Bless You! |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
1/31/2009 |
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Pea,
I like how you approach and handle this, the fluent almost offhand style adding pathos to the tragedy of broken threads, failed relationships. This is fine work.
John |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
1/31/2009 |
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Pea:
This is sad when a marriage fail. Nothing would seem and feel the same. You have spun a wonderful tongue-in-cheek tale. Sad situation, but with a good dose of humour!!! Enjoyed!!!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
1/31/2009 |
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Excellent write, Pea; well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
1/31/2009 |
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| What a unique and wonderfully written tale you spin, Phyllis. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
1/31/2009 |
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Phyllis,
A very sad yet with a dry humor. Enjoyed very much.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/31/2009 |
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((((Pea)))),
This one hits right between the eyes for far too many. For being fictional, you make it believeable, honest and R E A L. That's a hallmark of a talented writer: to enable the reader to sink their teeth into a character and make them think, OMG, that's ... ME. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
1/31/2009 |
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Well said I like the way you unwound this from beginning to end and the way you ended it...pets can be a lot less expernsive and a lot easier on the heart.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
1/31/2009 |
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| Spectular write on a Heartbreaking subject. Love and hugs, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Carin Spirit |
1/31/2009 |
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| Very imaginative and familiar. Thank you Pea. Be Well. Carin` |
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