Skulls, Hearts, and Butterfly Kisses
by * * Starman * *
Sunday, February 08, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Midnight moonlight madness. Very surreal.
Non-Euclidean concepts of parallel lines,
Lewis Carroll called Euclid's line to chat,
Mathematical symbols, sorcerer's signs,
Jung's skull grinned like a Cheshire cat.
Symbolic language of the fantastic,
Cat-faced speakers butcher diction,
Harbors of dark virgin alien fantasy,
Knife-wielding poets murder fiction,
Read this poem with nebulous eyes,
Truth hidden to sway a porous mind,
Beautiful butterflies in colorful flights,
Leather and lace two hearts entwined.
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|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|I can picture an English teacher asking kids - Now what did the author mean by this? An unusual write, Rockie. Hugs,
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|The poet, like some Grand Priest of Incas fame, takes his poetic knife to extract a still beating heart as offer to a ghoulish Bard-god.
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
|Beware of poets...for their words are sharper than the swords!!!
Thanks Rockie, for a thought-provoking write!!! This was very creative!!! Well-done!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by ~ Chanti
|An interesting abstract compilation. The last line caused me some confusion in that it seemed to be a departure from the theme but I'm happy to admit this and accept that I don't need to 'understand' all that I read. Poetry is open to personal interpretation. You're obviously a very capable wordsmith and I look forward to reading more of your work.
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|Great poem,excellent work.take care
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This sure "kick starts" the thinking process. Thanks, Rockie. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|Oh dear, and I just nicely put my head back in the box. I just had to read it, and read it, and read it again. Clever beyond my imagination. Hugs, J'nia|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Wow Rockie I feel as though this one has taken me to a different wave, as usual it is a great write from a great writer. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Tabitha Carter
|You have created a very dear poem with much meaning, didn't you? Now, I had to research but you have made me seek....and I am intrigued. The dark and the light, leather and lace...such a needed combination embraced. Scattered words with hidden meanings, definitions to each of them, connecting, relaying the next....important to fuse. Harbors of dark virgin alien fantasy...mysterious, pure, out of this world-dreams is what I feel from this. I do like it, Rocky. Makes me think alot and I love to go inside my head and sit there with wonder and awe! brilliant!|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|So sorry to bother you, Rockie:
Columbus in Italian is Columbo.
England's John Cabot was Italian.
My porous mind is easily swayed.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|A little change of pace here, huh Rockie? Well done my friend.|
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|Man I gotta read some of those knife wielding poets writes, what an adventure that would be...or am I reading one??? lol, this was great Rockie as always...love and hugs, Bonnie|
|Reviewed by 000 000
|The last two lines ROCK! I kept imagining the "Alice" white rabbit with his pocket watch running madly exclaiming...Balderdash! LOL
Now please take those lines and write a valentines message to Bridget...then allow us to read it. please?