And I tell myself.
by Justin J Vargas
Tuesday, November 19, 2002
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If you found the right path,
Could you trust it to be the right one?
If you cared for the things you did,
Would you still be doing the things you do?
And I heard all of your problems,
Absolutely know what you did wrong,
Would you listen to me anyway?
More importantly, would i even bother to tell you?
The good teacher, teaches the students to teach themselves.
What if something were to change your life forever?
What if it all ready happened?
What if...?
What if nothing.
People can go on much longer,
Much longer than they think that they can't.
Insparation is an irratation,
Shedding my skin a new way,
Just for it to grow back another day. |
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I made this one awhile ago. I was sitting at a friends house, over hearing a conversation about some drama between a b/f and a g/f. I was thinking
about their problems. I could prolly touch it up some more... But maybe later.
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| Reviewed by Linn Lindner |
11/23/2002 |
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| spectacular...thought provoking...insightful. You got it all baby! ~~~Linnie |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
11/19/2002 |
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| Eveytime you come up with an answer Justin, you reveal another problem. bill |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
11/19/2002 |
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| nice insightful poem, justin! well done! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :) |
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| Reviewed by Ashley Tabor (Reader) |
11/19/2002 |
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I really hate those words, "what if"! I live my life trying to avoid those thoughts, action speaks for its self, forget the what if's or could have, just do it. : )
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| Reviewed by richard poor |
11/19/2002 |
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| good insight... |
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| Reviewed by Drkman |
11/19/2002 |
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Justin,
What an interesting thought this one is.
"If you cared for the things you did,
Would you still be doing the things you do? "
Never really asked myself that question but probalby really need to. Nice write.
Drkman |
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