Complete in defeat
by Justin J Vargas
Monday, March 24, 2003
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Always expecting the right things to go wrong,
I just figured it would help me be strong.
Seems like my moral beleifs, was the only strong part of me.
Life would be so much easier, If i was just care free.
Oh great spirits of the world,
Help me find what I need.
Great protector of all,
Please don't leave me to bleed.
I may be pathetic,
But this is only when I can't see,
Thee not-so-obvious path, right in front of me.
Though I don't expect any help,
In my time of need.
I realized a harsh reality,
Also serves as a self-help remedy,
That turns my life around, to help me beleive.
There is hope and chance inside every little tragedy.
Though nothing comes easy, and life isn't free.
Some of the best things out there cost little to nothing.
This could be false hope, just leading me on,
I'll try to remember not to give up,
When some of the best things in life,
Just seem to go wrong.
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|Reviewed by Tracy Kiewel Sutterer
|Great Job, Justin! nice write.
|Reviewed by richard poor
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Justin, this had so much emotion in it and it is finely wrought.
I hope it isn't you. If so, read THE KEY TO YOURSELF, by Dr. Venice Bloodworth and SELF MATTERS by Dr. Phil mcGraw.