AuthorsDen.com   Join (Free!) | Login  

     Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
   Services MarketPlace (Free to post!)
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    eBOOKS new!     BOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    EVENTS    VIDEOS    GOLD    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Steve Kerr, iAntoine Raphael, iKarin Fleischhaker-Griffin, iElisabeth Barstowe, iJ. Joy Matthews Alford - Sistah Joy, iAlfred Garrotto, iSophie Davis, i

  Home > Relationships > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Amor Sabor

· Become a Fan
· Contact me
· Success story
· Books
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 135 Titles
· 2,833 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Jun, 2002

Amor Sabor, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.




Featured Book
Relationship Magic--- God only Knows
by Tuchy (Carl) Palmieri

No man is an island. What is life without relationships? It is often the case that relationships cause us the most pain. Relationship magic helps increase joy and minimiz..  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members


Featured Book
An Unforgettable Journey
by Lena Kovadlo

Join me on an unforgettable journey of life filled with love and heartbreak, happiness and sorrow, death, personal struggles.....  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members



Popular Poetry (Relationships)
  1.  Love With The Proper Person
  2.  Thank You Baby For Loving Me
  3.  Trusting others...
  4.  The Crush
  5.  You & I
  6.  Life As I Now Know It
  7.  Love This Side Of Heaven
  8.  Tears
  9.  Openings
  10.  a forever that never arrived...
  11.  Soulmates we'll always be...
  12.  The Light on 83rd...
  13.  Heart Hunting
  14.  Unbalanced Relationship
  15.  CREEP
  16.  Communication Today has Gone Astray
  17.  your pure white sands...
  18.  Making Unfeigned Love
  19.  Two Bonded Street Waifs
  20.  Face The Music





Through the eyes of Renoir
by Amor Sabor

Tuesday, August 03, 2004
Rated "PG" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Become a Fan

Recent poems by Amor Sabor
•  Our Pacific Journey Pt 1
•  As Two Bodies Merge
•  When the Heart Soars (Dedicated to Tiana)
•  Written in Sand
•  I Trace Her Smile
           >> View all 133

(revised)

“Through the eyes of Renoir”

Through the eyes of Renoir
I had painted a hole in my life
All that was imprinted in my fragile memory
seemed so hazy and not very clear
I can only attest to what embe dded in my heart
Emotions of crystalline clarity
The pristine hue of innocence
The bleached side of ignorance
Painted bold with a shade of opaque life
The images in my mind were blurred strokes
Brush marks running across October’s pride
A two dimensional home with nostalgic accents
One filled with the laughter of children
Fine furniture without a fingerprint
That no one but dust was able to enjoy
Echoes in the dim hallway bouncing
The bedroom spun too fast in the darkness
I would fall asleep at the drop of an atom
And nothing from that point made sense
When I awoke it had all disappeared
The hallways were empty
The closets were all bare
But the memories continued to linger
All as if it were only yesterday
But the visions are faded and cloudy
As if I were seeing it all once again in silence
Through the eyes of Renoir
Hazy, smeared and blended together
A puddle of mud filled with salty tears
My head in my palms at the edge of yesterday
Splattered paint was a daily decoration
Hanging like a painting from my heart
An empty soul moves around the room
Aimless and without inspiration
A cold draft blows through the window
But I can no longer feel the chill
Not until love would enter my heart again

© 2002-2004 Amor Sabor

Neon Dreams
Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!


Reviewed by Silent Dream 8/16/2007
Vivid imagery. Descriptives, colorful and real. A living painting in these lines. It breathed...

LOved this.
((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 8/5/2004
I had to read this one four times...it sent me in so many different directions. "the edge of yesterday..." the brink of tomorrow just waiting. A delight to read.

Love,
Elizabeth
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/3/2004
Oh Amor This one hits like a rocket...aimed straight at the heart!!

Hits home tooooo close for comfort!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 8/3/2004
i like this
Reviewed by Robert Montesino 8/3/2004
Amor! So good to be reading you again "Through the eyes of Renoir" is a solid reminder of why I enjoy reading you so much! Your beautifully descriptive verse tells a story, visual bits of a Poet's heart & mind! Well done my friend.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/3/2004
Superbly composed, the images vivid, you are a joy to read as always, and I'm so glad to see you posting! You've been missed Amor!;-)
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 8/3/2004
I was lost in this one Amor, exquisite, emotive perfection, as always.



Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us


Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
© AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.