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Through the eyes of Renoir
by Amor Sabor

Tuesday, August 03, 2004
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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(revised)

“Through the eyes of Renoir”

Through the eyes of Renoir
I had painted a hole in my life
All that was imprinted in my fragile memory
seemed so hazy and not very clear
I can only attest to what embe dded in my heart
Emotions of crystalline clarity
The pristine hue of innocence
The bleached side of ignorance
Painted bold with a shade of opaque life
The images in my mind were blurred strokes
Brush marks running across October’s pride
A two dimensional home with nostalgic accents
One filled with the laughter of children
Fine furniture without a fingerprint
That no one but dust was able to enjoy
Echoes in the dim hallway bouncing
The bedroom spun too fast in the darkness
I would fall asleep at the drop of an atom
And nothing from that point made sense
When I awoke it had all disappeared
The hallways were empty
The closets were all bare
But the memories continued to linger
All as if it were only yesterday
But the visions are faded and cloudy
As if I were seeing it all once again in silence
Through the eyes of Renoir
Hazy, smeared and blended together
A puddle of mud filled with salty tears
My head in my palms at the edge of yesterday
Splattered paint was a daily decoration
Hanging like a painting from my heart
An empty soul moves around the room
Aimless and without inspiration
A cold draft blows through the window
But I can no longer feel the chill
Not until love would enter my heart again

© 2002-2004 Amor Sabor

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Reviewed by Silent Dream 8/16/2007
Vivid imagery. Descriptives, colorful and real. A living painting in these lines. It breathed...

LOved this.
((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 8/5/2004
I had to read this one four times...it sent me in so many different directions. "the edge of yesterday..." the brink of tomorrow just waiting. A delight to read.

Love,
Elizabeth
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/3/2004
Oh Amor This one hits like a rocket...aimed straight at the heart!!

Hits home tooooo close for comfort!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 8/3/2004
i like this
Reviewed by Robert Montesino 8/3/2004
Amor! So good to be reading you again "Through the eyes of Renoir" is a solid reminder of why I enjoy reading you so much! Your beautifully descriptive verse tells a story, visual bits of a Poet's heart & mind! Well done my friend.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/3/2004
Superbly composed, the images vivid, you are a joy to read as always, and I'm so glad to see you posting! You've been missed Amor!;-)
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 8/3/2004
I was lost in this one Amor, exquisite, emotive perfection, as always.
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