|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|MY GRAND KIDS LIKE AICE IN WONDERLAND UP UNTIL THE PART WHERE SHE MEETS THE QUEEN...THE PART WHERE ALICE IS RUNNING FOR HER LIFE TERRIFIES THEM. SO, CAN YOU IMAGINE IF THEY SAW YOUR VERSION(SMILE)? POOR ALICE. TERRIFIC WORK WITH A GREAT RHYME PATTERN. WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Such a wondrous delight,Amor! You are so talented,even with internal rhyme,this is a keeper,thanks for sharing!|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|This is very kool Amor.....loved the rythmn!
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Newfie hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|amazing and John is right a great pace and timeless! ~ Morgan|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Absolutely in the spirit of the thing, Amor,
well-paced, witty and highly entertaining;
to write with such fluency and sheer confidence
like this needs a mastery of the subject in hand
and that you most certainly have.
I love this ageless poem.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is so very entertaining!
Thank you for a wonderful rendition of Alice, Amor, and you have made it so masterfully written!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|some things age well, just as good poetry ...|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Excently written as always, Amor.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Wonderfully done Amor.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Wonderful as always Amor, I will have to share this one with my daughter, Alyse, she loves anything to do with Alice in Wonderland....especially the song White Rabbit by Jefferson Airplane...lol
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|It's been a long time since I've read Alice in Wonderland. Your poem brings it all back to me in a delightful way. I think I like your old-style of rhyming poetry. A difficult, but very well written, piece.
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Well done, my friend.|
|Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa
|Nice message, nice lesson we can all use. Thanks.|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Giggle, giggle...delightful during the way...until,
lesson learned of what not to do...to lose one's head.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Cleverly concocted, Amor; quite a tale indeed. Coincidentally, I was inspired to write an acrostic about "Alice In Wonderlan" about a year ago which I posted here at AD. Thank you for sharing your wit and humor. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my ... Excellent writing..was a pure delight to read this sweet man...Hugss|
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|A pleasurable romp through the "looking glass", seeing Alice and her friends in a new and very funny light. Many of the lines in the poem are hilariously and ridiculously bizzare... just the way I like them! The poem may be old, but was thoroughly enjoyed by this reader!
A most entertaining read. Good work. Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|A pure pleasure to read, Amor. You had me laughing with the bed-wetting. Witty and playful. I like your poem more than I like the movie. Thanks for sharing this. Hugs,
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|i adore rhyming pieces, this was delightful, entertaining, and humorous...paragraph breaks would have made it easier for my reading taste, but tis fine as it is.|