|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Some very expressive expressions: "Lighting all the wrong candles", "incandescent puberty", "spewing paper-cut words"... and many others.
I can imagine what "plastic truths" or "syllables" are. Very interesting.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Open, honest and eloquently raw. Stunning work Amor.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Magnificent piece, Amor!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|There is much to garner from your poem, Amor; and it is worthy of much more than a single reading. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|THE 'CHAIN' BROKE...AT LAST. WELL DONE, AMOR AND ENJOYED A GREAT DEAL. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|It is as though you have taken bits and pieces of so many and put into words that needed to be heard Amor. Beautiful yet sad writing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|I have to say I like the comments that have already been written. excellent Poem. ~ Morgan|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
I love the tone of vulnerability in this piece. These are feelings not easily expressed by most of us and that's something I can appreciate for it's not a forte of mine. There are so many moments of this poem I can relate to, maybe even in a different way than intended. One of your best!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|An intense relationship, Amor ... one which attaches to the soul for a lifetime. It is as if you sliced open a vein onto the page. So well done! ~Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|For a while I was thinking that you doth protest too much, and was actually doing a bit of begging the the bone to be thrown. As I kept reading, however, I understood that the relationship you have described was full of one-sided passion and in fact the other side was playing at love. Good rant.|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Tears...of your heart
Opening this old wound, I
would bandage, if I could
As with your writing of it
was so sincere, I cried
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|I will give you another wow, because this piece is so very good.
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|wow this is not a one-time read...every soulful line is relatable to anyone who's ever been in a fading toxic love affair...yet cannot release or be released. absolutely compelling...am anxious to re-read and re-read...kudos amor|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I love how you have woven modern technology into this timeless quandary that could have been written in Roman times. It is also interesting that you did not include the computer.
I can tell that it's based on truth because the lines brought out the best in you. The more strongly we are affected by events, the better we write about them. This is nothing short of great writing and poetry.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Wow...emotive offering...very deep emotions revealed in a few lines...of a relationship gone BAD!!
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
i've read this several times
and each reading i get lost in it again,
lost in its images, the depths of its nuances and complexities,
lost in its feeling of pain and personal salvation
and such mature understanding of how and who and what we are.
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL, TALENTED SENTENCES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|