|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|Your poem is a bit like looking into your heart, which is the essence of your romantic nature and good deeds for others. You weave your words so well that the reader must read your words again, making sure they did not miss one of your heartfelt lines, for to miss even one line of your posts would make one sad. Amor, you should select the poems that truly touch your heart and put them into a book. If you do, I will be the first one in line to purchase one. Joy
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Beautiful heart felt sentiments of romance and love...M|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|okay, that was just wonderful, to pull this apart and point at favorite lines would reduce me to a bigger babbling idiot at , wow this was great!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|confessions of the heart "captivate empathy and surprise
in the cool magic of kisses stolen in the dark" ...
lovely poem, Amor ...
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Exquisite such a love and such a dream. This kind of love transcends the physical into the soul realm. So beautifully penned Amor.|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Endearing and so well written for
such an unconditional love *Amor*
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Amor, Exquisite is this tasteful yummy poem..'treasures hidden behind eyes' your poem is a treasure!
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Beautifully penned, Amor!!!
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|You unravel such a beautiful blending on the ethereal level and it seems becoming lovers, at least in fantasy, is inevitable and natural.
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|I DON'T KNOW, AMOR. I FEEL THAT AT LEAST HALF OF A FANTASY'S VALUE ...AND BEAUTY...IS THE 'SECRET' OF IT. TO REVEAL IT WOULD BE LOSING SO MUCH OF IT...DON'T YOU THINK? BUT THEN AGAIN THAT WOULD DEPEND ON...THE TWO DREAMERS. WELL DONE, AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|spill then the ink of your dearest confessions
those meaningful words arisen from your heart
that reveal where we go in the sweet midnight
where we find comfort in one anotherís refrain
the symmetry of our dreams meet our desires
evenly paced within the beating of our hearts
here our two souls pace a ground of tranquility
and find the treasure hidden behind our eyes
to me this stanza is a perfect summation of soulmate love, Amor, starting with that spilled "ink of your dearest confessions" which goes on to locate "the treasure hidden behind our eyes"; here ensues such deep peacefulness and contentment, through the "symmetry of dreams", the "desires evenly paced" leading to the "ground of tranquillity" which sounds like Heaven itself: to be forever wrapped in the arms of the one that we truly love. To reside in open-hearted lightness instead of the tippy-toeing dark would indeed be bliss. xx
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|A very mystical and meaningful place where two lovers share their most intimate memories and dreams. Superbly written with the precision not often seen in love poetry.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|"...spill then the ink of your dearest confessions..."
i'm eavesdropping here on an open heart
and the risk it is and the courage it takes
to speak out; this is splendid, Amor, splendid
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|"tangential" new word for me
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|To trust another with your deepest, maybe darkest confession(s) is a fearful, but sometimes necessary thing to rid yourself of. To come to someone and bare all is the greatest test of friendship/and or/love.|