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Sushi
by J.A. Aarntzen
Tuesday, November 03, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.

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This is my stab at a haiku.

Sushi

Taken off the hook

And is not cooked

Overlooked.

Storyteller on the Lake

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Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis	11/6/2009

Now, how does one go from Cook and Me to a ku?




Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan	11/3/2009

a bit eerie for the fish! a good start to writing haiku but if i remember right, its sylables are 5-7-5--not sure, i havn't done much with them

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