welcome to the eternity after a nuclear winter
in death I burn, eternity awaits
I see myself falling from the heavens
as with the rest of the angels
damnation of eternity becomes my fate,
the years as they become, Charon awaits
in the fires I learn, torment in the beginning
flames as they rise higher still,
damnation in the eyes of fate, all that awaits
God sees as the rest wait their turn to burn,
in death I burn, eternity awaits
I watch the flesh melt away my bones,
as the fires of a nuclear winter begin,
the eons demise as the bomb melts the world
mass exiction in the human masses,
damnation of birth, exiction to earth
while the world dies, I spread my wings
angels cry while the choir of demons sing
in death I burn, damnation becomes its birth
evolutional demise and the destruction of creation
I hold the keys to death and hell,
as they await to awaken from their dead,
congregations with their stomachs full of bread
as they pray to God but their souls burn
in death they burn, their souls will eternally learn
in death I burn, their torment is their beginning
fates awaiting when they are greeted by Charon
in death they wait, hanging from the gallows
by their throat the demons feed, dangling from the pole
burning in the flames with their wayward souls,
as the nuclear winters take their toll,
another congration for the boatman to greet their way
in their demise, become their damnation and a day
crucifixtion becomes their reality in lakes of piss
within the eyes that are seen in the shadows of dys
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|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
WOW You haven't wtitten here for quite some time in the poetry area.
You Are The Dark Goth Poet!
Fabulous Poetic Write!
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|WOW, very powerful poem, striking imagery.
I guess the ferryman is keeping busy :)
thanks for sharing this gem
love and peace
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|...wish I never felt like this. Well done!!
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
Exceptional write Nickolaus...hmmm
|Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez
Reality is as this well written piece!
|Reviewed by Terry Vinson
'I watch the flesh melt away my bones..' classic, inspiraing stuff.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A frightening "slap in the face" reality check. Thank you, Nickolaus. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Sherry Gibson
Very graphic but interesting write.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|wow...very original and bold write...superb...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!!!|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|Nick!!! Good to read you here~~~~
this is a devastating display pain of fires and a stark reality awaits....haunting
Outstanding done as you do!!!
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|The imagery as horrifying as it is sure brings one back to reality...quick, fast, and in a hurry! Excellent work, Nickolaus!|
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
This is an end to see, not seen. So powerful, horrifying, inspiring!
Excellent frightening awakening.
ps on the story of the haunted school, now a park, is the park not haunted, building gone spirits gone? You stick in my mind. Many things you stir.
|Reviewed by Mary Quire
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Yes he does create very graphic images in his posts. Nice to see you posting them again.|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|What pictures you've drawn with your poet's pen!
|Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Chilling in imagery and word usage, you've penned a winner! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)