finding the reasons are in time
as they go without seasons,
waiting for the tolling bell,,,
ticking down for my last hour,,
as it comes when it tolls and chimes,,
it comes in the hours of last rites,,
where it comes to death by flames,,
looking for the reason for a blame,,,
faith as it is only the illusion,,,
hallowed as the blasphemy,,,
looking for the eyes as it sees the truth,,,
parting away from this world,,
as comes with the executioners song,,
where everything had forever gone wrong,,,
piss it all away where it stands in hope,,
piss it all away where stands in life,,,
where it comes in the final hours,,
that comes in the dwelling dreams,,
that comes when one leaving hope,,,,
crucified with blood on their hands,,,
that comes with a cross of thorns,,,
purity of the eyes of the molested,,,
where they ask the innocent,,
"would you like to touch jesus christ,,"
where it comes within the eyes of hell
disguised in the heaven's guiding light,,,
closer to god, buried in shit -- as one sees,,
as it comes to see, pissed all away,,,
begging for their innocence,,,
raped away withouth their shelter,,,,
vast in the eyes as they see, tormented,,
sewn their eyes among the blind,,
the post-modern Sodom and Gomorrah,,,
where they live to no longer see tomorrow,,,
that comes in the demons looking like angels
raping within the form of faggot priests
among the eyes of the nightmares
walking among the faith of the bastardized,,,
Americanized Sodom, Americanized Gomorrah,,,
where they fuck childen in the name of God
dead in the flames, penality I give,,,
where in the eyes of the children that are raped,,
no release, that you don't have the right to live,,
in justice's blind eye, the arrest of the faggot priest,,,
Americanized Gomorrah, Americanized Sodom,,,
raping within the grace and name of God,,,
keeping the prayers clean, soaking bible in blood,,,
confession from the eyes of judgement,,
the grace as they would die by flames,,,
burning the flesh away from the faggot priest,,,
mother, son, and holy ghost, bless this church,,,
in the flames as they burn that comes the curse,,,
This one is by far going to be very contraversial -- the "Fuck You Gaigan anthem." Basically bad mouthing the monster for what he done and he deserves the injection. Since I wrote this one -- Geoghan was arrested and killed for the animal he is. Have fun burning in hell, mother fucker.
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|Reviewed by Sherry Gibson
|Rough and raw and right to the point. I will call this one a composition. You have stated in very easy to understand words the disgust and anger so many of us feel over the unthinkable things done to our children. Is it 'controversial'? To some no doubt it will be. I don't see it that way Nick. You feelings are justified, your anger is acceptable and your statements are right on. Someone needs to stand up and shout it out to the world. People who use Religion and God to cover up their crimes need to be exposed and tore down. Great write! If you get a chance, read my article "Religion versus Spirituality. Your "composition" is just one of the many reasons I steer clear of "religion" in our society.
|Reviewed by Robert Montesino
|I've mostly read your stories but this poem caught my eye & I just have to say it...wish I would have written this! Righteous anger directed toward depraved souls "Raped by Grace" rocks the mind & soul!Well done my poet friend...well done!|
|Reviewed by Mary Quire
|To be taken advantage of by a trust of that magnitude is by far one of the greatest atrocities. I agree with your voice in this work. The anger is justified.
|Reviewed by Debra Conklin
|I applaud your choice of words, you said it exactly the way it needs to be said. Your anger is justifiable and there is absolutely no controversy here, you speak the truth, just as it should be said.
|Reviewed by Laura Via
|An in your face type write ... nice vent and something like this needed to be said. Enjoyed.
|Reviewed by richard poor
|it needed to be said,you said it and it is a good say.|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Yes, I do like this write. Stark & Gritty, just like the truth.
|Reviewed by Esther Spurrill
|This needed to be said. Too much evil has been done in the name of a good God.|
|Reviewed by Nicole Lasher
|No offense, and I do appreciate that people are rightfully angry about this sort of thing, but this seems to be mostly a collection of cliches. It's poetry. You're allowed to feel.|
|Reviewed by Nicole Lasher
|what's controversial about facts? the verses are not Hebrew but do speak with the same voice of justice.|
|Reviewed by amelia
|very true. painful words. thundering anger.|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|wow yes controversial...but soooooo true...you are right these men so called priest your poem is right on point....
|Reviewed by jude forese
|interesting vein of existenitial imagery...|
|Reviewed by Diane Hundertmark
|Ah but you've stated you seek controversy. With this you have found it. Hard driven point. I found it hard to find a rythmn in reading this, but perhaps that was also an underlying point you were making. Or did I just miss that? Well done all the same.
|Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
|Oh yes, why don't we ever get rid of controversy and lead a pain life. Wonder, wonder.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Controversial indeed, but I overlook the foulness because I see the point made and detest that this world has the likes of such horrendous examples to dement the minds of our youth. Yet, my hope lies in the world to come,which is more real than this world.|