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to no one I pray
that comes in never
when I watch them
watching them pray
whisphers of blasphemy
as it waits beneath
waiting for no one to be
as from no one I pray,,
pray to nothing
ever getting what faith
as it awaits in fate to die,
as draws from aeons
that falls dying in end,,
to no one I pray,,
comes forever beginning,
when war is the unbirth,
from ashes of birth
to rape of the unbirth,,,
to no one I pray
that comes in death
of the Christian deity,,
from dreams in birth of all
that becomes......godless.....
godless prayers that I become,
as in the beginning of
mankinds fall....to become...
as the shadow of fate,,,
in aeons of the end,,,,
from no one who hears,,
in the sickness in birth,
that comes without healing,,
in the devoid of the Deity,,
that in prayers I don't pray
in the hope of the godless,,,,
of the deaths in the 2800
which would follow in sleep
of the ten thousand years...
to no one I pray,,
of hell that gathers inside
where it is no where one
could even begin to hide,,,
in the blind that sees,
in horror that remains,,,
from whispers heard,
as they are spoken in blasphemy,
ashes of the becoming true ,
in the 1000 year sleep
of the being that is Cthulhu,,
from no one is heard
in death of whisphers
growth in darker aeons
when death may die,
from the deaths birth
in the blood of 2800
which is not deceased,
may become the eternal lie,
when it is heard
to no one and nothing I pray,
he lies sleeping in prison,
of waters that are dead,
still but yet dreaming,,,,,,
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| Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader) |
12/19/2003 |
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Eternal hope that springs from despair - hello? Is anyone out there? Well done with just the right blend of 'creepy...'
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
7/14/2003 |
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words that are born from the unborn???
you have a way of moving.....very well done!!! |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
7/8/2003 |
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| Well crafted |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
7/4/2003 |
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....wondrous in its dark luminescent beauty..where would the light be without the dark..the merging,blending,melding...hmmm...excellent write!!
vesna |
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| Reviewed by Terry Vinson |
7/2/2003 |
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Man, the Lovecraftian style you pen never ceases to amaze. Keep it up...
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
7/2/2003 |
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Nick,
This was really good, and extremely deep! Just my type of poetry!
Maria |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
7/1/2003 |
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I love horror writes
but have a hard time
writing them. This is
chilling. i have a few
on AD that I think is
good. Read "Pocession"
sometimes.
I'll be reading more of you...
~~Linda~~ |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/28/2003 |
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| just excellent... like the Lovecraft reference... |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
6/28/2003 |
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{{{Nick}}}
Hello Luv! Long time no see, you and your work! WOW, what a riveting and chilling write! Keep them coming!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader) |
6/28/2003 |
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| A heavy hint of Lovecraft and a little bit of Clark Ashton Smith here and there, but this is definitely your own voice, Nickolaus! This is eerie and unsettling work, well-executed! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
6/27/2003 |
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Well done.
[whisphers-whispers] |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/27/2003 |
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A chilling write!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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