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Truth
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Dennis Domrzalski
Friday, September 26, 2003
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Truth on an everyday level and without the sloppy, embarrassing emotionalism of standard poetry.
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Like a toad without warts
And a kitchen with no sink,
A pen ain't nothin'
Without any ink.
You can hold it and feel it,
And move it any way you think,
But a pen won't write
If it hasn't any ink.
White paper, black paper--
Be it lavender or pink--
A pen won't write
If it ain't got no ink.
Like a devil without sin
And a sewer with no stink,
A pen ain't nothin'
Without any ink.
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/4/2009 |
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Giggle....simple and to the point. Thanks for the laugh.
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Stan Law |
8/28/2008 |
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Yet you could scratch your name with it,
Though... that might raise a stink.
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| Reviewed by Sherry Gibson |
8/8/2004 |
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Dennis,
You have a remarkable style with your writing. So down to earth and to the point and yet it makes me smile.
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Debra Conklin |
5/29/2004 |
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And a writer ain't nothin' w/o any words. Something you seem to have no trouble with. (smiles and grins)
Debbie |
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| Reviewed by Rodd Jokre |
10/29/2003 |
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| To the point! |
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| Reviewed by Vesna TwinFlameunion |
10/27/2003 |
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A pen ain't nothin'
Without any ink.
..and yet you're SOMETHIN'..tha's what I think!!!
Vesna...LOL!
Fantabolus write!!!
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
10/10/2003 |
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| Amen. |
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