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by m j . hollingshead
Monday, May 22, 2006
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We take some liberty with the form

Diamante form is
Adjective Adjective
Participle Participle Participle
Noun Noun Noun Noun
Participle Participle Participle
Adjective Adjective

Shy, Nervous
Fearful Scared Worried
New Teacher, 4th Grade, 5th Grade, New Teacher
Doing, Working, Nice
Confident, Smiling
Good Bye

*** Josh

Shy, Scared
Frightened, Fearful, Afraid
New Teacher, 4th Grade, 5th Grade, New Teacher
Working, Showing, Doing
Confident, Sad
Good Bye

*** Rickie

Nervous, Scared
Worried Afraid, Hiding
New Teacher, 4th Grade, 5th Grade, New Teacher
working, Showing, Learning
Happy, Confident
Good Bye

*** Nick

Shy, Anxious
Scared, Hiding, Worried
New Teacher, 4th Grade, 5th Grade, New Teacher
Working, Showing, Doing
Confident, Ready
Good Bye

*** Carl

Shy, Anxious
Scared, Worried, Fearful
New Teacher, 4th Grade, 5th Grade, New Teacher
Not Scared, Not worried, Not Afraid
Confident, Calm
Good Bye

*** Ash

Shy, Scared
Frightened, Worried, Fearful
New Teacher, 4th Grade, 5th Grade, New Teacher
Working, Showing, Doing
Confident, Happy

*** Kenzie

Shy, Afraid
Frightening, Scared, Worried
New Teacher, 4th Grade, 5th Grade, New Teacher
Working, Learning, Participating
Ready, Confident

*** Maddy


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Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Interesting changes in each one showing the authors personality :-) Thanks for sharing.
Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Children are a seem to have a good bunch there. Teachers are a remarkable breed, too. Good ones, like you, usually earn the respect of their pupils!

Reviewed by Christine Christine (Reader)
Reviewed by Louise Bohmer (Reader)
Thank you for sharing!

All the best,

Louise xox
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
Hard to believe these talented kids are so young!
Thanks for this!
Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Lovely poetry~`*
This was fantastic!
Reviewed by Walker Jackson (Reader)
Such imagination these kids: so smart.
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
I, too, t h a n k y o u. . .for being a great teacher and for
posting these fascinating and revealing diamantes. To the children who wrote them, I say, Join hands and take a bow. How fitting
in this case that diamantes sounds so much like diamonds.~~'Pea' <3
~~PS: Should I have said diamante poems? Call it poetic license.;)
Reviewed by Peter Paton
It is amazing what a dose of confidence instilled into students or anyone for that matter can do to their morale and esprit de cor !
Excellent write
Reviewed by L. Figgins
Great job all of you! Oh these take me back to my school days. Seems that the fear is universal but through working and sharing together, it all works out. Right, kids? One step at a time, one day at a time and all of a sudden you're there. Thanks, Molly...

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Molly, it seems Ash is the only one not worried (giggle). These are just too precious. The children's personalities come through very clear here. Isn't the talent of children marvelous? Give them all a "well done" and a smile for me.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love. May He also bless the children, that they may never lose this innocence. May He be with you and all the children always, and at your sides constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Reviewed by William Manchee
Even with a very structured assignment like this you can see the very different personalities of the students. Very interesting and entertaining!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
These are so good, Molly! the children's talents are amazing. Thank you for sharing their work with us!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
THANK YOU for all the comments for the children's work. More coming next year.

Constance to answer your question, the kids were exploring how they felt at the beginning of the term -unsure, frightened- as opposed to how they feel today as they ready to move on to 5th grade -confident, happy, assured.

Reviewed by Constance Gotsch
Why are they all the same theme this time? That's almost disappointing. They're good, but what happened to the playfulness of different ideas?!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Great work here !!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by jude forese
it's important that you expose your students to different genres ... they will learn to explore ... great job guys!
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

"4th grade Diamante poems" are creative and well composed.

Congartulations to ASH, CARL, NICK, RICKIE AND JOSH; and thank You, Poet for the introduction to the form and to the new Poets.

In gratitude and admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by George Carroll
Give these kids a big round of applause and the teacher also for instilling in them the fine art of poetry. It's not a sissy's game.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Well I feel good, knowing the future poets will be creative having learned all of these fine forms! Bravo to all of you, and your wondreful teacher!;-)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
As I've stated before, this reminds me so much of when I taught Grade 8 English. Lovely sharing here and thank you. Best wishes to all,

Regis (B.C., Canada)
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