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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
6/19/2010 |
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My goodness what a work!!! "HISS grade 1 HALLOWEEN acrostic" very interesting and what a wonderful Teacher of love and compassion you are MJ! I am sorry I missed this one! I must stop by more often! May the Lord bless and sustain you at all times and seasons of your life! Thank you for sharing and caring especially for the little people...yes the children!!!
Much Love,
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
10/20/2009 |
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| off good to a spooky start, have a happy scary day |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/17/2009 |
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Student 10
H orrid
I maginary
S scenario
S eason
From Oxelosund, Sweden, a little port outside Nykoping, about 75 miles south of Stockholm, the country's capital.
My name is Georg, without the end e, it was taken by a Halloween sorcerer!
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
10/11/2009 |
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Hellooooo STUDENTS!!!
I am so pleased to read all your HALLOWEEN Poetry!!
You have all done an excellent job!!
The wicked witch of the west enjoyed too I hear!!
I am very impressed with your submissions!!
I hope you all continue to use poetry within your
creative pens & colors of expression!!
Happy Halloween to ALL You Spooky Cookies Drizzled with Frankenberry frosting!!
I hope you all enjoy your treats haunting your neighborhoods this October 31st, 2009!!!
Happy Trails under the Full Moons of Bats & Ghoulish Witches!!
Dark Poetess: Countess Victoria :)
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| Reviewed by Mary Coe |
9/8/2009 |
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| ute. I like this. |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
8/30/2009 |
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| These are cute and brings back memories when I taught school. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
7/21/2009 |
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| Very clever...I love the voice of children! Happy (early) Halloweeen! ~ Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
4/2/2009 |
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| very imaginative work and most enjoyable to read -- certainly you have much to be proud of m. j. as can be witnessed in your student's creativity -- peace and love -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
3/21/2009 |
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| Eerily, yet cheerily, spooky. I.e., d e l i g h t f u l. :) |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
12/31/2008 |
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| I love it~`* |
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| Reviewed by Z McClure |
12/27/2008 |
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I enjoyed reading all of the acrostics and think it is wonderful that you young people are using the creative ability that God has given you!
It was a teacher who first made writing exciting for me so many years ago. I live in Norwood New York, which is just south of Massena, in northern NY State. Keep up the GREAT writing all of you!!! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/23/2008 |
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I am sorry I missed this before. Nice work. Best wishes from Chilliwack, British Columbia, Canada,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines |
12/23/2008 |
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From East Texas: There are fascinating magic words for kids at that age. "Slime" is a favorite. There is a kid's site named NeoPets; lots of cool games and one of the prime favorites is "Wheel of Slime" where they win NeoPoints. Also, it is amazing how quickly the kids will pick up and start composing limericks. Nice work here, Molly :-)
Ted |
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| Reviewed by Terry Robertson |
12/20/2008 |
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| I'm no kid by any means, but I sure liked this charming piece. I think it is wonderful to exposure your youngsters to this wonderful genre. There is nothing lovelier on paper than a well-written poem. |
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| Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse |
12/11/2008 |
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| Having been a teacher for thirty years, I see the creativity at work in this exercise as these young students activate their vivid and sometimes wild imaginations. :) |
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
11/21/2008 |
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That's good work class, you know some useful words.
I hear you love poetry so I'll introduce one of my favourite poets Spike Milligan who loved to write for children. Spike knew poems can be silly because it's sounds that matter (like Hissssssssss) or Nong.
Here is one of his poems, read it and if you like it I'd love to see what kind of poem you can make with silly sounds.
On the Ning Nang Nong by Spike Milligan
On the Ning Nang Nong
Where the Cows go Bong!
and the monkeys all say BOO!
There's a Nong Nang Ning
Where the trees go Ping!
And the tea pots jibber jabber joo.
On the Nong Ning Nang
All the mice go Clang
And you just can't catch 'em when they do!
So its Ning Nang Nong
Cows go Bong!
Nong Nang Ning
Trees go ping
Nong Ning Nang
The mice go Clang
What a noisy place to belong
is the Ning Nang Ning Nang Nong!!
<a href="http://www.poemhunter.com/spike-milligan/poems/>More poems by Spike </a>
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
11/14/2008 |
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Actually, this are quite creative from the Grade 1 students. Congratulations for having a great class!!!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
11/13/2008 |
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| These were precious ... |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
10/30/2008 |
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| These are so cute. Enjoyed them, Molly. |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
10/29/2008 |
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MJ,
Bless those youngsters, & their teacher!!
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Lew Duffey |
10/29/2008 |
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That is really cute.
God Bless,
Lew |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/29/2008 |
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Molly you have a wonderful class of poets! All of you are doing
so well,I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry! Be careful,and have a Happy Halloween! Good scarey poems!
I live in Californioa near Sacramento...
ET |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
10/29/2008 |
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I love Halloween too, and these acrostics are very good and the students should be proud of themselves for coming up with the words. I live in Alpena, Michigan, and I think it is really great that young people can get into the spirit of writing poetry. Thank you children, and thank you Molly for posting these adorable acrostics.
Hugs,
Barbara |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/29/2008 |
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| Although I'm a bit older than a First Grader, I, too, love Halloween, and your Halloween poems. I live in the Midwestern woods, which get quite spooky this time of year! |
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| Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry |
10/29/2008 |
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your students are fun
Halloween is almost here!
Booooooooooooo.
~Thanks, Donna. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/29/2008 |
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| wonderful!! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/29/2008 |
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Howdy, students, from North Central Texas! Just want to tell you how delightfully scary these Halloween writes are! Nothing too scary but enough to give a BOO! Well done, children. :) And Teacher: anything you do to get the little ones interested in poetry gets an A+ in my book. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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