|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|I'd probably flunk this test, mj, but high marks for
all nine students. I'd probably violate the rules and
write one about the lamb lying down with the lion. -gene.
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|SO...GOOD! YOU ALL DID THIS VERY, VERY WELL! THANK YOU AND LOTS OF LOVE.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|EACH AN OUTSTANDING OFFERING
THANKS FOR SHARING
LOVE & PEACE BE WITH YOU
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Delightful! Student five tugged at my personal sense of humor and values. Though not one of them wrote with any trace of inferiority or mediocrity. Give them all a gold star for creativity. I bid you and the first grade, joy, peace and love my dear friend. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Such power and energy in the language
of these buds;
range, aptness, form and insight.
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Love them all...
Cheers to your young poets,
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|What creative young poets!! I love these very much and thank you for sharing them!|
|Reviewed by Paul Kyriazi
|Hello everyone. I'm from Japan, but was born in San Francisco, California. And grew up in Pittsburg California. Can you find that little town on the map? It's near Concord and next to the river that goes out to the Golden Gate Bridge. Pittsburg is 40 miles east of San Francisco.
I like all those poems. One line I like is 'FLUFFY FARM WILD GOBBLE'. That's very poetic. I also like 'FLUFF PUFF WILD ROAR'. My favorite is student #9 with the line 'LAMB CUTE WARM' because I raised up a baby lamb when I was a boy. I give it milk from a bottle until he became a big sheep. So the words Lamb Cute Warm made me have that memory and made me feel good. But I liked all the poems with the good suject. Keep writing and learning good english, because writing is so fun and important for comunication.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|These are great! Congratulations on a fine literary effort and keep up the good work. Best wishes,
Regis Auffray (Chilliwack, British Columbia, Canada)
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|These are all really great! It's wonderful that each differs from the other,even with the same words. Excellent work,students and teacher!;-)
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Another B-A-A-A-A-ING Good Job by Your First Graders, Molly. Truly Enjoyed!
|Reviewed by Lew Duffey
|Or is it the other way around?