|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Powerful images. Thank you for your service and for sharing.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Most warriors are more boy than man, boyhood lost forever in the dark caves of war. A truly compelling write.|
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|A well written piece,Great work,take care
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Great writing sweet man..enjoyed very much...stay safe and well..Hugss|
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
Complete and such vivid detail.
Have heard not that I went on the "Tunnel Rat" tour but my husband has. Had the opportunity but that is one adventure regardless "once a Marine always a Marine" I just did not want to try! Regardless, I know this was not a tour by description instead reality and you have shared it from a bird's eye pov~Thanks!
Sure my husband will know exactly what you are portraying after his 30 yr stint in MC <smile>.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|War is hell, as you aptly pen here, Lloyd. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
|The not so glamorous side that is usually not written about. You have many experiences for the world to read about. Excellent write. R|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Lloyd, this should become a classic of wartime memoirs.
I find it difficult to think of anything more frightening
than to be stuck in a wormhole.
Aside: I was there for the invasion of Okinawa, on a navy DE
a few miles offshore. It turned out to be the worst naval
engagement in U.S. history. I was a baby at the time.
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|The use of imagery and the detail in this are incredible. Your last three lines tore at my heart.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
This is splendid in detail, tension, imagery and language, I was hooked from start to finish; I've never been to war and it's through such well expressed and vivid telling that its dangers and indeed horrors come home to me. Thank you so much for this.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You have very effectively shared what truly must have been a most fearsome experience. Thank you, Lloy. Love and peace,