|Reviewed by Barry Yelton (Reader)
|Well said, Lloyd. It seems to happen to most of us.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This is indeed a true and meaningful perspective, Lloyd. Thank you for sharing it. You (and perhaps your daughter) might want to check out my poem posted here at AD entitled, "Back to School." Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Hope, yet for our teenagers, if this write is any indication - well done, Lloyd!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Hopefully the wick never gets that low. Very nice.|
|Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
|Terrific poem, Lloyd! I can see her, and bless her lively imagination. Perhaps she'll save the world.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
There's something terribly sad and empty in this situation and in the controlled, elegant telling of it. A fine poem.
|Reviewed by Patricia Martin
|Ah. Yes. My imagination was beaten to a pulp, only to raise its rather alien head while I'm playing the back nine. I wonder where I would have gone with my imagination, my candle burning at both its ends. Superb poem, Lloyd. Bravo.