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A Little Girl's Wish From Santa
by Linda M Hill

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Santa, I'm not asking
For much this year
I don't want any toy's
Or teddy's to hold near
Santa, I don't want presents
Wrapped in green and red
I just have one wish, Santa
Before I go to bed


I miss my Daddy so much
Since he went to Heaven
Jesus took him to the sky
From the tragedy of nine eleven
Could you talk to Jesus
This I want you to say
Ask if I can borrow Daddy
Just for Christmas day


Santa, you can talk to Jesus
God's angel can bring him home
I'll explain to Mommy
We have him just on loan
I have it all worked out
If Jesus will listen to you
I want to see Mommy smile again
After all she's been through


It will be hard to let him go
But I won't be sad
I'll just be so happy for the
Christmas day we had
I want to feel him hug me
Just one more time again
I want Daddy to read me a story
Just like he did back then


Santa, is that a tear
I see in your eye
Santa, why did my Daddy
Ever have to die...

Linda Hill 2003

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Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 11/13/2008
Your poem has given me goosebumps. How heart-wrenching and how sad that it real for so many children who lost a parent on that tragic day. This plea to Santa moved me to tears. Best always, Elizabeth
Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader) 12/25/2003
This is so emotional and gripping.
Love, Susan
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/21/2003
A gem of a write from a heart of gold. Love and peace, Regis.
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 12/21/2003
So touching Linda. I don't know what's worse, having your dad die and leave you or having him alive and never care or love you at all. I figured out for myself, I will have only one parent to grieve over in death, which is my mother. I'm not going to waste one tear on a man who never was a father. cheers. G
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 12/19/2003
Linda...another soul touching write from n luck...BHWUAN
Reviewed by Russ Okamura 12/19/2003
Powerful with passion and you really jerked the tears from my eyes with this awesome write. As I always said, you are really a great poet, a truly inspirational one.
Reviewed by Alex Drinkwater, Jr. 12/19/2003
Linda - all I can say about this is "Wow!" I hope you have a Merry Christmas and a great 2004.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 12/17/2003
Linda, this touches the heart so deeply. Have a beautiful holiday season.
Reviewed by Jennifer Ragan (Reader) 12/17/2003
A very touching Christmas wish.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 12/16/2003

there is a lump in my throat the size of texas--GEEZ what a powerful write

i will always remember and never forget *tears*

(((HUGS))) and may your holidays be bright


karla. :(
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 12/16/2003
Beautiful heartfelt write Linda!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by George Carroll 12/16/2003
A beautiful heartwrenching write.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 12/16/2003
heartbreaking write; thanks for sharing, linda! :( (((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. >tears, tears, tears <
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 12/16/2003
Powerful write, keep it up...
God Bless
Reviewed by Kay Mott 12/15/2003
I pray this wins it for you, Mom.I loved it.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/15/2003
So, so sad, Linda, but wonderfully written.
Reviewed by John Bidwell 12/15/2003
Oh what a precious heart!
Much love angel,
Reviewed by jude forese 12/15/2003
cuts right to the emotional core ...
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 12/15/2003
Linda {{HUGS}}{{TEARS}}
This is beautiful just like
your soul.


Happy Holidays Sweetie!
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 12/15/2003
Ah, Linda... you sure do tug at my heart! Wonderful work.

I wish you and yours blessings both large and small this Holiday season!

Bunches o' hugs,
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 12/15/2003
Heartfelt write Linda..
Have the Seasons best my friend..
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 12/15/2003

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) 12/15/2003
Happy Holidays!!

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