|Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman
|You carry this poem well, with a subtle nuance in rime and vivid imagery through simple and effective language.
I would advise tightening the meter into something more cohesive, however. The style of language almost demands it.
|Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
|My favorite time of year captured perfectly in three stanzas. excellent!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|This is beautiful work.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Hues in abundance, lovely mind paper...|