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Another Heartbreak, Another Poem.
by Bella Smith
Friday, November 07, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Heartbreaks... the only thing worst then an actually cut because this is the one cut that takes forever to heal.

I wrote this at a random time. It's not for anyone really.

So I'm sick of playing,
the same old game.
Honestly, it's getting,
Oh, so lame.
I never though we'd grew apart.
But I guess that's the price,
for a borken heart.

You always said you'd catch me,
when I felt I would fall.
You said you would be there,
no matter what, through it all.

What happened to forever and always?
The door to my heart was always open,
the hall between our souls,
was suddenly forgotten.

And why has fate,
suddenly decided to change?
Why did it slowly,
begin to fade?

Now our paths,
have directed our lives,
In different ways.
Why is it still,
so hard to say?

It's time we move on.
Find something new.
It's going to be hard,
to get over what I knew.

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Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo
As I read this poem I got this vibe that this could be turned into a song and a great one...

The content of the poem is emotional, moving, and something people can relate to. I enjoyed the read and loved the poem.

I noticed that you have some typos in your poem:

I never though we'd grew apart. --> should say I never thought we'd grow apart

for a borken heart. --> should say broken

Thanks for sharing and please keep on writing.


Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
a good write on such a universal subject!
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