|Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen
|Another fine write PM. We are our own prisons,
as we are too, our own salvation.
|Reviewed by John Domino
I do prison ministry. How about you?
|Reviewed by Tim Horton (Reader)
|Thankyou for this write, very powerful. Once again you've drawn me into your world. I love it, and you thankyou.
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|There are few people that can admit that their pain comes from within themselves...denial usually exceeds admittance.
You sparked my inner self with this write!
Excellent, creative piece!
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|marvelous poem but the end was unexpected and it is the end itself that this poem is so interesting. As I said many times in my poems nobody can free anybody unless sombody frees himself/hereself.|
|Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Neither am I able to access your audible voice...but you speak quite clearly through your poetry!
|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
|Unfortunately I could not hear your voice - but I guess the problem lays at my side.
Great writing, nevertheless.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Oh your voice is so lovely
and the reading of it was beautiful
great job Kay
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|An outstanding write ..Kay
Great twist at the end
Love your work
thanks for sharing
Love & Peace
|Reviewed by J M
|Your wave is pewrfect and your poetic voice as your pens voice is so nice to hear... This is a powerful poem...
Light & Peace,
|Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
I am only getting random words but your voice is very pleasant. And so is your poem. The problem could be my speakers. Love Joyce
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Let us hope the "escape" in beneficially therapeutic, Kay. Thank you for sharing your sentiments. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
You have a wonderful voice! Enjoyed your recital! It is great to see you on the board once again!
Thanks so much for your prayers for my brother!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Kay the poem is outstanding as is your recital! If that's a first you are a natural! Wow! I'm so impressed!;-) It's so good to read you,as always, but to hear you is really a treat! I don't know how to download it any better, this was great!
Love and hugs to you!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|outstanding metaphor and powerful sentiment ... an introspective release of emotion that i find extrememly sad yet dearly moving ...|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Wow Kay, a marvelously sad write..
|Reviewed by Steve Ralph
|my dearest Kay, this is so sad, beautifully written and recited, as always,
but so very sad.
take very good care my Ozzy friend,
your pommy pal Steve
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|one of the saving graces of being female is the social acceptance of crying, knowing it releases so much.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|BRavo bravo, this is a truly poignant write and you can tell it is straight from the heart and passion motivated. Very good.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Excellent, Kay, very emotional write too many will identify with; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Ditto Lisa's comment here, an all to familiar malady of the mind.
Ty for the wisdom,
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|I don't think I know anybody that can't relate to this.