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Prisoners escaping.
by Kay P M- Devenish
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Prisoners escaping


exits of the night


cautiously kill the guard


running out of sight.


No one to see them now


no witness to behold


the prison cell is empty


it feels so dark and cold.


The warden is still absent


no capture will be tried,


( impossible to capture tears,


'specially when they've dried.)


No bars to hold them in,


all the tears are free


and grief's the only criminal


in this prison I call-




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Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen
Another fine write PM. We are our own prisons,
as we are too, our own salvation.

Reviewed by John Domino
Great write!
I do prison ministry. How about you?

Reviewed by Tim Horton (Reader)
Thankyou for this write, very powerful. Once again you've drawn me into your world. I love it, and you thankyou.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
There are few people that can admit that their pain comes from within themselves...denial usually exceeds admittance.
You sparked my inner self with this write!
Excellent, creative piece!
Love and Peace~
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
marvelous poem but the end was unexpected and it is the end itself that this poem is so interesting. As I said many times in my poems nobody can free anybody unless sombody frees himself/hereself.
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Neither am I able to access your audible voice...but you speak quite clearly through your poetry!

Excellent revelation!
Blessings, Rhonda
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
Unfortunately I could not hear your voice - but I guess the problem lays at my side.
Great writing, nevertheless.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Fantastic write....BHUWAN!!!
Reviewed by A PAX
Oh your voice is so lovely
and the reading of it was beautiful
great job Kay
pax A
Reviewed by William Bonilla
An outstanding write ..Kay
Great twist at the end
Love your work
thanks for sharing

Love & Peace
Reviewed by J M
Your wave is pewrfect and your poetic voice as your pens voice is so nice to hear... This is a powerful poem...

Light & Peace,
Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
Dear Kay,
I am only getting random words but your voice is very pleasant. And so is your poem. The problem could be my speakers. Love Joyce
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Let us hope the "escape" in beneficially therapeutic, Kay. Thank you for sharing your sentiments. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Hi Kay:

You have a wonderful voice! Enjoyed your recital! It is great to see you on the board once again!

Thanks so much for your prayers for my brother!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Kay the poem is outstanding as is your recital! If that's a first you are a natural! Wow! I'm so impressed!;-) It's so good to read you,as always, but to hear you is really a treat! I don't know how to download it any better, this was great!

Love and hugs to you!
Reviewed by jude forese
outstanding metaphor and powerful sentiment ... an introspective release of emotion that i find extrememly sad yet dearly moving ...
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Emotional offering!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
Wow Kay, a marvelously sad write..
Reviewed by Steve Ralph
my dearest Kay, this is so sad, beautifully written and recited, as always,
but so very sad.
take very good care my Ozzy friend,
your pommy pal Steve
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
one of the saving graces of being female is the social acceptance of crying, knowing it releases so much.
Reviewed by Felix Perry
BRavo bravo, this is a truly poignant write and you can tell it is straight from the heart and passion motivated. Very good.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Excellent, Kay, very emotional write too many will identify with; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Ditto Lisa's comment here, an all to familiar malady of the mind.
Ty for the wisdom,
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
I don't think I know anybody that can't relate to this.
Great writing.

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