Too many.(written in late 80's under my early pen name 'Sarah') (poem) by Kay P M- Devenish on AuthorsDen

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Too many.(written in late 80's under my early pen name 'Sarah') by Kay P M- Devenish Friday, July 25, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan
Too many 'if's' too many 'when's' too many 'sorry's' and 'Never agains' too many promises too many lies far too many 'one more tries'. How many were there before I knew that ACTIONS speak louder than promises DO ? ?? ( too MANY!) p.s. Thank you Bobbie yes it was spelling error...thanks for pointing it out,I changed it.Must have been rushing too much,sorry folks.

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Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy	7/25/2003

Kay, this is very good, just a small correction, in the first line is it supposed to be too many? Otherwise it a great write. Bobbi




Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan	7/25/2003

Good write..to the point.. Jenni




Reviewed by Erica Ivory	7/25/2003

I hate promises... This is a great write.




Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya	7/25/2003

Perfect write....BHUWAN




Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie	7/25/2003

Oh Yes, I understand all to well, This was excellent, Reindeer




Reviewed by E T Waldron	7/25/2003

Wonderful Kay! Terse and true to the point, Excellent write!




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	7/25/2003

to the point!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)	7/25/2003

You are so right!!!!!! In Spirit, Bear




*Reviewed by Joseph OneLight�*	7/25/2003

Thanks for these words of wisdom Kay. ~Joseph




Reviewed by Kate Clifford	7/25/2003

Perfection in a few words!




Reviewed by Steve Ralph	7/25/2003

perfect as always Kay and so much said in so few words yet again. you have such an immence talent for doing that. your pommy pal steve.




Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)	7/25/2003

Sometimes promises should be silent till they manifest. excellent Kay, Hugs PJ




Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)	7/25/2003

I can promise you anything, but you should always insist on the cash.