|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I can certainly relate to this compelling write, Kay. One of my daughters recently moved to Toronto (I live on the west coast here) and the other one moved to Melbourne, Australia. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
We always miss the things we can't have for the time-being.
Instead of treasuring what we had and have.
Humans are so stupid sometimes, don't you think so???
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|I know this feeling Kay, but now you have something else to look forward to...the next visit :). Excellent write.|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|Ahhh..my Kate..once a mother always a mother..it seems that is one role that is never relinquished..my God our kids give us so much joy...I am still surrounded by all of mine..six of `em...even though they tend to drive me nuts at times...i revel in their life scenarios and know that I will always have them within me..no matter what !!!
Great write...it is a present to us mothers....I missed you heaps as well...oxoxoxox
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a mother's love is very powerful...|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|I feel your longing to be with your girls...it is so genuine and powerful. Beautiful work.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I know the feeling! My daughter lives a few provinces away from me. Wonderful write.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
beautiful, yearning, fantastic write of longing and love
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
|Beautiful write, Kay.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Missed you partner!!
Come join the Party on the Beach!!
Lovely heartfelt write from you KaY!!
|Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
|aww, so lovely and sweet... these girls must know they are loved deeply|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|This is so poignant that it made me eyes well up. Beautifully written, Kay
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Kay, this is so heartfelt and written with such expression. You capture the moment in this write.... thank you...missed you, too... stay strong...
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Lovely write, Kay! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn. :D|
|Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
|Well written piece, progression is nice..|
|Reviewed by Jimmy Holder
Really well written! Flows wonderfully!
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Oh, Kay.. the way you approach this longing is so effective, so beautifully poetic.. the curtains, the bit of sun.. I could feel myself there and could feel that yearning to have them with you.. This is such a human feeling and you've written it exactly as it truly is. I love this poem. katy xox.|
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Absolutely sweet and loving.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Yes, true, I miss my two who live far away
I've missed you very much Kay.