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Torn to ribbons...one heart. (fiction)
by Kay P M- Devenish

Monday, October 06, 2003

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There upon the floor

you rummage with your claw

through ribbons bleeding raw

( fleshy trinket slashed to gore)

 paw and gnaw,

you snip it all...

 the remnant

                    of 

                     my heart.

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Reviewed by Dale Clark 10/7/2003
Descriptive and powerful piece!
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 10/7/2003
Excellent, strong write.
Reviewed by Trixie Love 10/6/2003
Hi Kay,
Ouch is right...
Glad this is only fiction.
Very creative with the
red....

Powerful write....


Hugs,
Trixie :)


Reviewed by Micha Julian 10/6/2003
Powerful...and very painful..
You are amazing and, this, this caught me by the throat and wouldn't let go, in a way...you know?
Kay, you awe...
xxoo
m.
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 10/6/2003
What an intense, sharp edged poem! Bravo!
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 10/6/2003
Excellent !

TRASK
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader) 10/6/2003
Excellent, Kay. Powerfully expressed!
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 10/6/2003
Very hard-hitting write!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/6/2003
Bleeding Ha?

We are on the same page girl!!

You missed the "Beach Party"....lol!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader) 10/6/2003
Powerful work of true excellence..

Justin
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/6/2003
powerful stuff from you, kay; i hope it is only fiction... well done, my dear ozzie friend! :( (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 10/6/2003
Ouch, glad it's fiction. Powerful expression of pain.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 10/6/2003
Hey very profound write!!!!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 10/6/2003
Powerful, strong write!
Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers 10/6/2003
wow, so strong and compelling to read.....
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot 10/6/2003
Ooooooh aaaaaaaah a powerful statement, and aw shucks i hope it is fiction, for you, not fact.

Very profound write mate
Hugs
Ch'erie
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