|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Descriptive and powerful piece!|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Excellent, strong write.|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Ouch is right...
Glad this is only fiction.
Very creative with the
|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|Powerful...and very painful..
You are amazing and, this, this caught me by the throat and wouldn't let go, in a way...you know?
Kay, you awe...
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|What an intense, sharp edged poem! Bravo!|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
|Excellent, Kay. Powerfully expressed!|
|Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
|Very hard-hitting write!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
We are on the same page girl!!
You missed the "Beach Party"....lol!!
|Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
|Powerful work of true excellence..
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|powerful stuff from you, kay; i hope it is only fiction... well done, my dear ozzie friend! :( (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Ouch, glad it's fiction. Powerful expression of pain.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Hey very profound write!!!!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Powerful, strong write!|
|Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
|wow, so strong and compelling to read.....|
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Ooooooh aaaaaaaah a powerful statement, and aw shucks i hope it is fiction, for you, not fact.
Very profound write mate