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Torn to ribbons...one heart. (fiction)
by Kay P M- Devenish

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There upon the floor

you rummage with your claw

through ribbons bleeding raw

( fleshy trinket slashed to gore)

 paw and gnaw,

you snip it all...

 the remnant

                    of 

                     my heart.
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Reviewed by Dale Clark
Descriptive and powerful piece!
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
Excellent, strong write.
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Hi Kay,
Ouch is right...
Glad this is only fiction.
Very creative with the
red....

Powerful write....


Hugs,
Trixie :)


Reviewed by Micha Julian
Powerful...and very painful..
You are amazing and, this, this caught me by the throat and wouldn't let go, in a way...you know?
Kay, you awe...
xxoo
m.
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
What an intense, sharp edged poem! Bravo!
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Excellent !

TRASK
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Excellent, Kay. Powerfully expressed!
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Very hard-hitting write!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Bleeding Ha?

We are on the same page girl!!

You missed the "Beach Party"....lol!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Powerful work of true excellence..

Justin
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
powerful stuff from you, kay; i hope it is only fiction... well done, my dear ozzie friend! :( (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Ouch, glad it's fiction. Powerful expression of pain.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Hey very profound write!!!!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Powerful, strong write!
Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
wow, so strong and compelling to read.....
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Ooooooh aaaaaaaah a powerful statement, and aw shucks i hope it is fiction, for you, not fact.

Very profound write mate
Hugs
Ch'erie
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