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| Reviewed by Julia Boyd (Reader) |
3/17/2007 |
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i know that it has been a few years now, but i came across this poem and i just had to say thankyou for writting this poem it is beautiful.
I had someone close that died in the bali bombings and it would definatly be nice if all the fighting was to end.
Thatnkyou. |
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| Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington |
10/16/2003 |
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This was wonderful, Kay!!! My prayers for all.
~Jackie~
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
10/16/2003 |
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Agony, pain, sorrow..that, cannot be forgotten..and peace? It will come about only if we have it within..how many can boast an inner peace..hmm..alas Kay not many...My heart goes out to the families and friends of the victims for they are the ones that are shattered now.
Well written,
Vesna oxooxo
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/13/2003 |
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| sorry for the main your country is reliving... terrorism never solves anything... only the innocent suffer... but as long as man's instinct is to control rather than nurture, peace will be to no avail... |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
10/13/2003 |
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(((((((KAY)))))))) sending you and your country much love, peace and hope.
Love, JC xoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
10/12/2003 |
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If only aye mate!
This has a ring of Bobby Dylan about it, in the critique department, lol, you know that song, Oh heck I cant think of it but its coming to mind. ( aaaah You should do unto others as you'd have them, do unto you.... I love Bobby.
Funny how a write brings up an image or an emotion, well thats what its for, Well done, and I hope and pray as you do, NO MORE OF THIS SHIT!
RIP all those who fell.
Love Ch'erie |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
10/12/2003 |
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Thanks for sharing this Kay. Sorry it ever happens.
Take care........with love
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/12/2003 |
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(((kay)))
i haven't forgotten...and another car bomb blew apart a hotel in baghdad this morning
very heartfelt, moving, sad poem...thank you for sharing
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader) |
10/12/2003 |
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| Brilliant work! |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
10/12/2003 |
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Kay,
This is so well done.
"Don't want a world of fighting
where no one can forgive.
Why on Earth can't we see
that we have HEAVEN here?
If only we all 'LET LOVE BE' ~
then WAR .....might... disappear"
Lady Peg |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/12/2003 |
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| You tribute and compassion are so needed in today's world of jaded leaders and thinkers. If only we could have a resurgence of hope and not give in to the thoughts that this is the way it has to be, because man is what he is. Man can also be noble if enough people believed that, we might be able to overcome the complacency and fight off the evil! |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
10/12/2003 |
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| Strong message of this well written poem, noted and appreciated! Good job, Kay. Our thoughts and prayers are with all victims of hatred and injustice! |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
10/12/2003 |
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I have to agree with
handsum...
It's a shame what evilness
does to our beautiful world...
Outstanding Kay!!!!
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| Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) |
10/12/2003 |
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| Very compelling write...and a sad commentary of our world today. |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
10/12/2003 |
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| it's sad to admit, but it seems as long as man rules the earth there will be evil acts done. best wishes |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
10/12/2003 |
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Once a jolly swagman sat beside the billabong,
Under the shade of a coulibah tree,
And he sang as he sat and waited by the billabong
You'll come a waltzing matilda with me
Waltzing matilda, waltzing matilda
You'll come a waltzing matilda with me
And he sang as he sat and waited by the billabong
You'll come a waltzing matilda with me.
Lest we forget
Dani :( |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) |
10/12/2003 |
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Fantastic Tribute so well done.
Taylor |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
10/12/2003 |
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| Kay....Great Tribute....excellent write....let us spread the message of this great poem all around the world...gem of a write.....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/12/2003 |
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Ya lets just love,,,,thanks for sharing this Kay!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
10/12/2003 |
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War is a terrible thing. It is so destructive. It destroy lives, and destroys spirits.
Very heartfelt write indeed, Kay!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o( |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
10/12/2003 |
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Excellent Kay! We need to remember that terrible day, Outstandingly written,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell |
10/12/2003 |
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Great Poem Kay
War is a very fearful thing and even more so when we see the mounting list of victims. I only seem to have stuck in my mind that the majority of them are young men not yet having lived but dieing ..
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
10/12/2003 |
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Kay, how well many understand the pain of this day for Australia. Nobody wants war. But one must defend themselves from the likes of terrorists. They have to be stopped. Prayers from around the globe will be with you and your countrymen on this day.
You've managed to depict the agony well in this write. Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
10/12/2003 |
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| Pleasant thought but not likely to happen as long as one man has something another man wants. |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
10/12/2003 |
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My country Australia is in mourning today as it is the Anniversary of the Bali Bombing (1year)when terrorists killed may innocent holiday makers.
The poem is an old one but suitable,I think. |
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