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California sky deep blue
with startling white clouds
floating from here to infinity.
Hills burnt brown with countless
days of year-round sunshine
now alive with velvet-like
green growth brought to
life by the kiss of heavens tears.
Rolling hills with wind rippled
undergrowth born anew by
as off in the distance
far mile upon mile
ragged mountains range with
snowy white crowns
leaving one to guess
if cloud topped
or snow covered.
Haze of the city washed
clean by wind and rain
so far as the
eye can see
with crystal clarity.
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|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Ain't spring in Socal grand?|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Very beautiful imagery Mark! Well done!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|I have never been to California but I have been to British Columbia a time or two and I picture California being a lot like Vancouver Island only warmer...someday maybe.
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|The skies were like that when I was visiting Carmel in February...stunning visuals, Mark
|Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
|Fantastic visual of a California Sky! Hugs,~ Chessly|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|It just sounds as though I'll have to make a trip to california and see things for myself. Great write Markie but I expect nothing less from you.
Your #1 Newfie Friend Hugs XOXOXO, Rose
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Thank you for the w o n d e r f u l .v a c a t i o n !!
Your powers of description and artistic discipline knock me for a loop.
Make us SEE amd FEEL, which is, like, a poem's job. Or anyway, an
Ahhhhhhhhh. Nothin' like a li'l R&R.
Only the 2nd time I've been to California. . .didn't even have to go through security, pay for the privilege of carrying luggage, and
sit with my nose plastered against the back of a seat ('cet, 'cet,
Be sure to put Chapel Hill, North Carolina on your itinerary. Azaleas are stunning right now, but I recommend October. Color's
outstanding and temps are usually just right.
xOx Phyllis xOx
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|...and rolling clouds under the Golden Gate Bridge covering Alcatraz gray ghosts view from Sausalito shores...
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|It sounds like a beautiful sky, indeed, Mark. Lovely visuals in this piece that gives a serene, calming feel to your reader. ~Lizzie|
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|Yes, it'a always most beautiful out here after it rains.|
Mark M Lichterman