|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|I wish I could stop chuckling each time I read this...but all this for over a hello? is pure genious work.
|Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
|fabulous title, and the piece itself appeals to me on so many different levels. personally, i'm a cuspian aries sun, sagittarius moon, pisces rising - why have i not read you before?|
|Reviewed by richard poor
|i like it,jus sorta goes...|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|This sounded a wee bit too familiar to me, Maria. No worries, just a characteristic of the brilliant mind...lol! You have an analytical brain, which processes so much information, theories, suppositions, etc. that it must have an outlet or explode. Thank God we are writers. Enjoyed this very much!!|
|Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
I read this the other day and had to let it sink in a bit. It is a look inside the mind of an overthinker. Being a self-proclaimed overthinker, I find myself spinning out of context at the drop of a "hello" all the time. You have given voice to my pain. Now I just have to find a support group....
|Reviewed by Trainee Poet (Reader)
|psychobiological thought of duality, existential struggle has been so well delivered in this astrology backdrop! Gemini and bipolar are the primary connecting symbols for me, which get into extended images! I liked the sharp humor down the middle, too! EXCELLENT WORK, though part of it may have escaped me, owing to my lack of knowledge in the field!
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Delightful! Maria, you sound like a master astrologist. I got a kick out of reading this. All I can remember about my sign is I'm Capricorn, Libra assending with my moon in Libra ... and I've forgotten what all that means, but I do remember that I don't have any fire anywhere! I want fire! LOL Oh well, perhaps, in my next life! Thanks, I enjoyed this witty and well done read.|
|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Yeah, I can hear this one pouring out all in one breath.
Actually I am Leo (sun)Saggitarius (rising) and Aries (moon) - and yes I did burn myself out at quite an early age. The fires are rekindled now though.
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|A whimsical look at the convoluted world of "saying Hello". "The fault, dear Brutus, is not in our stars but in ourselves."|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|my sun is in cancer, my moon in leo and my rising sign in aries ... is that luck?
luv the poem, Maria ... the astrological tides of our emotions moves through the planets and stars especially between coffee and cigarettes ;)
|Reviewed by Leah Wilson
|lol..lol...Thanks Maria. I'm not the sun, but, I got a kick outta this one! Love, Leah|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
this is so profound, well written, I read it with my mouth open
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Hello? lol well I don't know where in the
world my sun is, so the question is where
is my moon. Sorry Maria I wish I did know
a little about that stuff, but I confess.
But I do know I'm an aquarian!
Great write as usual!
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Smokin You Need To Do Sum Thin Else With Your Hands Or Chew Gum Or Ge A Hobby,i.e. I Smoked In Grade School(Kool) I Smoked In High School(Bad) I QUIT-Cannot Run Around Track On Your Face!
Off The Wall Write On!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|I am a total dodo over all the astrological stuff - which sounds fascinating - but the copious verbage sounds VERY familiar! :)) Sounds like my kinda "hello!" - unless I'm just waving, of course! Love the humour - knowing not what to say but saying it anyway! So good to read you again. Love your perspectives and insights, Maria. TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Alexandre Arnau
|i hope you meant this to be humor, because this is the funniest thing i've read all week.|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|The coffee is good , but I would kick the ciggie habit !
Interesting and analytical composition Maria
"I should note my sun is in Cancer
and isn’t that a kicker
since the sun (according to most philosophies)
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|okkkkk I know a few people who talk like this...scary
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh I loved this Maria, excellent. so powerfully insightful,
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
A revealing astroligical depicting of inter-cosmos of human
nature "Between Coffee and Cigarettes".
I enjoyed reading this symbolistical mind´s striking
masterpiece titled, "Between Coffee and Cigarettes".
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|YOu are such a grand poet Marie! This is magical;-)!