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Tired by June Thompson Thursday, April 27, 2006 Rated "PG13" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan -
i don't cry i don't scream i don't try to fix a thing i don't look i don't blink i don't cook i don't think i don't grin i don't smile i don't give in all the while because i'm tired i want you i want this i want to do what i wish i want them i want it all then again i won't take the fall i want more i want less i want to close the door and truly confess because i'm tired i need to be honest i need to be true i need this protest to end, be through i need to be careful i need to used caution i need not be dull i need not mention i need to be i need to less loose i need me i need to choose but i'm so tired i can't be you i can't be this i can't do what you do i can't be your wish i can't continue on i can't count on much i can't because i'm gone i can't expect too much i can't give in i can't let go i can't begin again but this you know because i'm tired

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Reviewed by Jane Rodway	4/27/2006

Tiredness seeps through this poem and leaves the reader saying, "Yeah, me too." I like the way this is set-up, too.




Reviewed by Felix Perry	4/27/2006

Weariness of the mind and soul can be more tiring then any physical exercise or labour we may take on. It is stress causing and usually tends the person to end up in a hospital with either mental health problems or a heart attack or stroke. You captured will the weariness of the different emotions in this your statement of what you are feeling and need and want. Felix




Reviewed by Sue Hess	4/27/2006

i can totally relate