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Teeter-Totter by June Thompson Saturday, April 29, 2006 Rated "PG13" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan -
To look into my eyes You'd never see The things I despise And wish I could be To look into your soul You'd never know What's kept me unwhole For the whole world I'd show And to dive into your ocean To swim in your sea To carry out the motion Of what is meant to be I would do anything I would do anything at all To take away this sting To not let myself fall But the pain is so deep The truth is so real The less I weep The more I conceal And to look itno my eyes You would never see The things I despise And wish I could be

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray	4/30/2006

I really do believe that I understand where you're coming from in these verses, June. To me, that's awesome poetry; to connect with the reader on the level that you intended. Thank you. Love and peace to you, Regis