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| Reviewed by Shinya Yawakazi |
10/16/2006 |
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| Yes this poem was really good I love it even the anime pic of the girl who i assume is suppose to be the Star Angel right?yeah im an anime lover in fact my name is based off a japanese anime^_^ |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
9/24/2006 |
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| This was Beautiful Lee, it touches like a butterfly lightly upon the heart! Great Write! with wonderful imagery! Warm HuGs!*She* |
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| Reviewed by David Arthur Walters |
3/9/2006 |
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The offer is tempting,
but emptiness has a hold
the soul has yet to conquer.
Indeed!
Thank you! |
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| Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon |
2/18/2006 |
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Very nice! I did love the imagery. ;) Silver
PS: thank you for your comments. The piece you read/commented on came to me in its entire form in a dream. I see what you mean about it and certainly had some thoughts on that too, but figured I would write it as it came out in my dream instead. I will see if I can work on providing the alpha and omega on that story soon. ;) Silver |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/15/2006 |
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Lee,
An inviting, beautifully imaged/written piece; well done!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi |
1/12/2006 |
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As all of your work, this is briliant and of a depth I very much appreciate.
With my best wishes for the New Year,
Mahdi |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
10/20/2005 |
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"...At water's edge,
waves lap a greeting,
stirring the sand.
Winds invite
the visitor to linger
and recieve a moment
that shall not return..."
Great lines throughout, Lee. |
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| Reviewed by Huda Orfali |
9/4/2005 |
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Wonderful poem and artwork, Lee
the soul has yet to conquer
Yes, the restless soul has to conquer this void and soar high
Penned to perfection
love and peace |
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| Reviewed by Robert Montesino |
8/25/2005 |
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| Wow Lee I think you captured the feeling of the graphic beautifully, nice orginally artwork well placed to compliment this verse! |
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| Reviewed by Mary Quire |
8/25/2005 |
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| Very nicely done. You take sci-fi poetry to a whole new level. |
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| Reviewed by Silvia Hartmann |
8/24/2005 |
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Very nice! Right up my alley :-)
Loved the "fragile shell of sky".
Cheers!
SFX |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
8/24/2005 |
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| Very intriguing original write and picture! I like! I like! |
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