|Reviewed by Shinya Yawakazi
|Yes this poem was really good I love it even the anime pic of the girl who i assume is suppose to be the Star Angel right?yeah im an anime lover in fact my name is based off a japanese anime^_^|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|This was Beautiful Lee, it touches like a butterfly lightly upon the heart! Great Write! with wonderful imagery! Warm HuGs!*She*|
|Reviewed by David Arthur Walters
The offer is tempting,
but emptiness has a hold
the soul has yet to conquer.
|Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
|Very nice! I did love the imagery. ;) Silver
PS: thank you for your comments. The piece you read/commented on came to me in its entire form in a dream. I see what you mean about it and certainly had some thoughts on that too, but figured I would write it as it came out in my dream instead. I will see if I can work on providing the alpha and omega on that story soon. ;) Silver
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
An inviting, beautifully imaged/written piece; well done!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
|As all of your work, this is briliant and of a depth I very much appreciate.
With my best wishes for the New Year,
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|"...At water's edge,
waves lap a greeting,
stirring the sand.
the visitor to linger
and recieve a moment
that shall not return..."
Great lines throughout, Lee.
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|Wonderful poem and artwork, Lee
the soul has yet to conquer
Yes, the restless soul has to conquer this void and soar high
Penned to perfection
love and peace
|Reviewed by Robert Montesino
|Wow Lee I think you captured the feeling of the graphic beautifully, nice orginally artwork well placed to compliment this verse!|
|Reviewed by Mary Quire
|Very nicely done. You take sci-fi poetry to a whole new level.|
|Reviewed by Silvia Hartmann
|Very nice! Right up my alley :-)
Loved the "fragile shell of sky".
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Very intriguing original write and picture! I like! I like!|