|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Lee- I like your metaphors how they jump out at you with such intensity! Great very Intense feeling poem, I understand where your heart is at! YOu will leave something of great importance, to the one who needs it most! I like your word usuage in your writings! Warm HuGs! *She*|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Wonderful poem, Lee! Its depth and inspirational awe, set my heart aflame!|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|This is an excellent flowing construct with a strong and assimilable message. Especially evocative for me!
I raised my hand in salute. Respect, acceptance, success, is such a fickle pursuit at times.
"A cometary epithet" Indeed!
Good one ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
|Reviewed by Mary Quire
|Lee, this one takes my breath away. To be remembered, to feel like you made a difference...that you left something worthwhile in your wake... I understand all too well.
|Reviewed by Judith Bailey
|There's a rhythm here that is almost hypnotic... I get it too when I look in the mirror, something I usually avoid these days.
"Betraying flesh denies desire, and fails ambitions adamant will--"
an awesome line
speaking of duality fears.
I will climb upon my wings of steel the very next time my mirror tells me of fleeting time, aging body and flagging soul. Excellent write.