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| Reviewed by John Domino |
11/6/2008 |
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Nice poem with a GREAT message!
Dr D |
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| Reviewed by manny moreno |
8/27/2008 |
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| very thought provoking |
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| Reviewed by Glenda Bixler |
8/13/2008 |
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| Hi Everybody! I'm still getting the hang of A/D...and I wasn't aware so many of you had commented! Thanks so much! I'm trying to get my friend to publish more broadly...maybe when he reads your words, he will! Thanks again! |
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
8/12/2008 |
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UNCONDITIONAL Love I felt clearly ~
I like this poem, has you reading it a few times, to let it sink in...
I think it's filled with a deep depth of beauty and thought!
The lines gave the reader much to comprehend of love and surviving! Trust is the underlying thoughts here, I hope I am close...
and I do hope (in your time here at the den) you come to read my heartfelt touches of your spirit, I hope to touch.
WRITE ON!
WELCOME HERE!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Soulful SHEExooo
STay Positive! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/2/2008 |
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The bridge is powerfully symbolic; thank you for sharing this poem, Glenda. Love and blessings to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
7/31/2008 |
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| I am not sure if you meant it this way, but it sounds like God speaking to a wandering soul, lovely work |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
7/31/2008 |
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There is a lot of sad feelings expressed in this poem. The meters and rhymes are perfect so this flows very well.
Sandie May :o) |
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| Reviewed by d. krusky |
7/31/2008 |
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What a story told with such expression. The emotions of the writer are open to the reader. "I too built a bridge is almost a confirmation of protecting oneself from the other. A very well written piece with a smooth flow through out the work. Enjoyed reading this work.
Smiles,
Dorothy |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
7/29/2008 |
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| We all have friends and there are many different kinds of friends in our lives. This was a passing though one I suppose. Even then we have to go on to better and pass onto a nother life in this creative world. You can do it, it seems we all need to get a better life sometimes and cross bridges to get there. |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
7/29/2008 |
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Spiritually sound, sturdy in structure, and a foothold on reality...to cross over this bridge is to know that many new opportunities await...be well always, Glenda...and welcome to the den...Blessed Be.
Warmly,
Sage |
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| Reviewed by David Delaney |
7/28/2008 |
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Wonderful writing here Glenda I enjoyed every moment, I know some people who need to build a bridge. Well done.
Dave. |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
7/26/2008 |
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| Great response... and that is just the kind of bridge that's built to last forever. Trust is truth, is it not? And THAT, will stand to the end of time. --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Linda Law |
7/25/2008 |
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| This is a strong writing... there is always a drift in relationships; yet we must learn to rebuild and gain strength... I enjoyed this. lindalaw |
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