|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Beautiful work filled with much longing...ahhhhh those pangs of romance...excellant!
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
|Very Beautiful james, and so filled with love and desire!
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|This is lovely, so longing and romantic.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Love the last line,of course the entire poem is lovely, beautifully expressed!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Beautifully done, James. Bravo.|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Oh how beautiful...
|Reviewed by samantha mane (Reader)
|awww, thats nice; may her ears harken to your loving lips. [and perhaps her body too; now THAT'S nice.]|