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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
5/20/2011 |
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The first analogy between the porcelain figure and the human psyche is so true and it made me want to read on. And I like the way you described fragility through an experience and its different aspects.
Nice.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
5/4/2011 |
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| yes, everyone can break. ~ Morgan |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/4/2011 |
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The fragility of a heart is only able to be rated by using the formula that equates how much that heart loves and can be loved.
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
5/3/2011 |
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Words spoken so dear and sincere a great poem indeed Laura
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
5/3/2011 |
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I really like your poem...it says so much.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
5/3/2011 |
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So beautiful indeed. We should go easy on one another and ourselves.
Well done.
John |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
5/3/2011 |
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This is so very beautiful, it left me breathless! Great writing!
Anna |
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