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I Never Knew
by D. L. Vegas
Tuesday, August 21, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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After we met

I never knew

I would fall

In love with you

You proclaimed

Your love first

I followed suit

You showered

Me with a love

So profound

It turned me around

Like a child's top

The exuberance I felt

And still do-

The words you speak

You know what they do

To my mind and body

I love you... ... ...


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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader) 8/22/2012
Beautiful. -- Diana
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 8/22/2012
Love can surprise us
It can come at the most
unexpected moments. Then
it cradles us in its arms
and we wonder where has it
been all this time.

It comes when it is meant
to come, and when it does
it will be the most glorious
of experiences that has come
to you.

Lovely Deborah

Love and Light
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 8/22/2012
A lovely ode to love.
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 8/21/2012
Spinning the top...landing on
love *Deborah* how sweet it is

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 8/21/2012
whew! what a whirlwind love is.........yes!

Love ya!

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 8/21/2012
I make sure I never fall in love, but
I fell once, ok twice, I forget actually...
I was tripped too wait I did the tripping
ha ha does puppy love count?
I really really fell for him, silly 14 year old I was :)
I love love's metaphors :) Love is just soooo utterly beautiful
& fun & passionate & endearing & playful...and you got it!!
Words.....sighhh yes the words!!!!
You Are Blessed in Mind & Body...and Soul Fire!!

Growing Deeper & Deeper In Love
Embracing Love's Bounty Always
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 8/21/2012
So true Deb, and you just never want that top to stop spinning!
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 8/21/2012
There is a duality that comes out of your poem. While women fall in love with words they hear, men tend to fall in love with action rather than words.

Hence the problem. Why love can be so complicated sometimes, when it should be quite simple like your poem.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson 8/21/2012
the sensations of true love are indescriable, but you have done that emensely well here
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 8/21/2012
Such love is a treasure....nicely done, Deborah!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 8/21/2012
ah, love is so joyous
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 8/21/2012
Simplicity and clarity in this one Well done, my friend, I totally understand...

Peace, love, and light,

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