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I Love My Sister Carol
by Carol D. Mitchell
Wednesday, August 13, 2008
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What my sister would say about me...

I Love My Sister

Carol

She grabbed my sister Carol she was only thirteen

Didn't know that Ghetto mother could be so mean

She lashed her own daughter for her lazy left eye

Never brought us a tissue to wipe her pretty eyes

Her hair she said is nappy to her Carol was not cute

My mother liked me better but to Carol she was brute

I am the raving beauty with a fine grade of hair

Whips punches, scratches, Carol's weeping over there

Saddest heart, I can feel it loving through this hurtful pain

Never fretting that her mother beat her all again

No love for Carol

Sister, I have your defense

Bringing water from the faucet now rinse, rinse, rinse

I hid my sister Carol and I did it out of fear

Hiding in the closet trying to get her out of here

Carol's "A's" stood higher than my Cee's & D's

Loves her mother same as I do but she's comforted by me

Much Love for Carol

I think about you

I will love you forever

you are Carol not Sue! Word

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Reviewed by Carol Surber	10/1/2008

Carol, I am Carol and my real sister is named Sue! She was my protecter as a child, against other children. Luckily mom was beautiful and loving. It was the other children who were mean to me. This one grabbed my attention. Excellent tribute to a sister. CarolHawks




Reviewed by Frances Seymour	9/14/2008

Wow! A truly emotional write. I commend you for this because I'm sure it was painful to recount these memories of your beloved sister. Blessings...Frances




Reviewed by Glenda Bixler	9/6/2008

Marcia? Why not as prologue? Just curious... By now, you know I get curious alot! LOL




Reviewed by Kathryn Perry	8/27/2008

I am touched by your loving comments about your sister Carol. She was lucky to have such a wonderful "protector". This is very well written and full of emotion. Thank you for sharing it with us at AD Blessings to you my friend Kathy




Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle	8/27/2008

Your poem shows the world what type of woman who have become due to all the pain that you have experienced.Take good care of yourself and keep on writing :-) Edwin




Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS	8/25/2008

A heartfelt powerful poem Carol! I can relate to this,as it brought me to tears! I use to bring a warm face cloth for my brothers welts/blisters on his back, from my dad and his physical abuse on him - as he sexually abused my sister and me... Being there for the ones you love, maks what you ware going through not so hard, and loving from the heart is where it starts! The bonding process to begin! Please! KEEP Writing, I love your style, your Upfront, in the face, the way I write - blunt! and tell it like it needs to be told - I am TRACKING your heart - What more can you share! To make us aware as your healing begins! with every word you pen! WRITE-ON! Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Soulful Sheexoo STay Positive and WELCOME to this caring den!




Reviewed by Stuart McCallum	8/24/2008

Carol, This is indeed a most powerful, heartfelt write. You are a courageous lady with a kind soul. Happiness always, Stuart (downunder)




Reviewed by Connie Faust	8/24/2008

This is so sad, Carol. I am sorry to hear about the pain you endured as a girl. Yet, you have risen from it and are using your days wisely. I commend you and pray God will continue to bless and to redeem the past by His grace. Welcome to Authors' Den! Connie

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